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The Dream (this is a poem)


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27 May 2011, 02:28 PM   #1
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I wanted to get some feedback on this. I wrote it a looong time ago. ^^



Deep in the bowels of the silent air
Lies a dream of that of a single mind
Waiting to be released.
The pain of its imprisonment
Gives of a deadly aura.
Anyone who tries to come near
Is shocked back, never to try again.

The dream sees earthly giants
On the sides of roads
It sees faeries flying on shooting stars
In the indigo rain.
The dream sees anger, depression, hurt
It sees the things other people have
That it doesn't.

Sometimes it cries.

For deep in the bowels of the silent air
The dream waits to be released
So the world and beyond
Can see it's true meaning
And admire it's hidden self.

~H.K.~
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27 May 2011, 07:22 PM   #2
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Tis' beautiful (:
I love the second stanza . it's so creative :D

28 May 2011, 11:41 PM    #3
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Posts: 350
Thank you. This is written from personal experience. (;
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