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Writing:Poetry:More Than She Seems

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8 May 2010, 03:24 PM   #1
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I wrote this around 3 AM.I have no clue what dream i woke up from.But i wrote it because
of a dream i had.

hot touch,burns like fire
running through the moonlit night
tumbling down onto cool grass
illuminated by the pale starlight
A girl stands there
with eyes like ice blue fire
looking around with a cold smile
she watches the lovers conspire
fevered dreams induced by her
her power is to be feared
she'll tell you whatever you need
whatever you want to hear
theres a mystery about her
what she is you'll never know
hair like russet apples
skin as white as snow
everything you want-when you look at her 
thats what you'll see
Beware!For the girl
is much more than she seems.

8 May 2010, 04:11 PM   #2
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
very nice! thanks for sharing how this came to you as well.

i knew of russet potatos but didnt know of russet apples so i looked them up. i liked that

always very nice and im impressed Samantha

9 May 2010, 05:50 PM   #3
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Thanks, Eddie^^

9 May 2010, 07:30 PM    #4
Joined: 5 Apr 2010
Posts: 1
realy cool! =D

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