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25 July 2009, 01:37 PM   #1
Joined: 12 Jul 2009
Posts: 22

I actually put a few good hours into this.  It's still not finished by my standards, but
I'd like to know what I can fix and do better on it before I go in for the finishing
The glove and shape on the left hand side haven't been coloured at all... so I know that,
that at least needs to be worked on.  ^^

25 July 2009, 04:09 PM   #2
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Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 124
o__o wow... it's...'s perfect. I can't really give you any suggestions on it. I
really love how you drew the eyes and hair. :D He has this somewhat airy look to him. ^^
You did a great job. 

The only thing that bothers me is how pixelated it looks like... Like some parts of it are
very pixelated and look very out of place, and not smooth at all. Like the lines of the
hair and face in comparison to the blended colors of the skin. 

xD I think you did that intentionally, but oh wells... 

:D Great job, I really love this piece. :D 

Oh yeah, I didn't notice it before but his left hand looks a bit weird. I think it's
rather uncomfortable to position his hands that way. I think if you tried to mimic his
hand, then it'd be somewhat uncomfortable. I don't know, but I think his middle, ring, and
pinkie is out of place. 

Hm... Great work though. ^^;

25 July 2009, 04:27 PM   #3
Guest Poster
Erm, the hair needs more shading. That`s all I can say. :D

25 July 2009, 05:03 PM   #4
Guest Poster
Wow, yeah this is pretty sweet :3
I love the background and the whole character design!

I think his neck looks a bit wierd though, like it's too thin
and angled a bit strangly. Also I'm not too fond of the black shading under
his chin, it just doesn't seem to fit the style of everything.
Ahh I hope that didn't sound mean! D8

Also his fingers are kind of wierd, like the way theyre
bending doesn't look too natural~

The left eye also looks kind of oddly placed, maybe if you move it
to the right a little, ehh idk.

But this is really awesome! And I'm a really big fan of all your stuff *A*
Hopefully my critique pleases you.

25 July 2009, 06:03 PM   #5
Guest Poster
WOA. this is awesomeee <3
The stuff i wanna point out:
-some lines and colors dont seem to be in sync 
with eachother . i mean, some lines are straight
 and pixelate and some are smooth and realistic. 
-the hand is in an awkward position <:|
-the hair needs more airiness xD its too straight

That's it :D everything's A-OK.

25 July 2009, 08:20 PM   #6
Joined: 12 Jul 2009
Posts: 22
Great!  Thanks for all the help!  
It's good thing the hand is still in line version since I'll have to change that.  
And looking at it now I really see what all of you mean by the pixelation.

27 July 2009, 05:20 PM   #7
Guest Poster
Wow, it really is good....I dun know if I can spot any mistakes.
I agree with Kyun though, where some parts of it are smooth and the other is pixelated,
that feels awkward for me.

The clothing looks almost real and his eyes are really pretty. <3
I like what you did with the background with the tree and building and the colors you used
are amazing.

28 July 2009, 01:43 PM    #8
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
i like the colors and the prince is well done! and is that a waterfall in the background?

i tried the hand position, and i think it might look ok if you moved the three fingers
toward the face more, especially the pinky.

seriously, though, i almost thought this was either a picture or one of those creepily
acurate paintings x-x
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

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