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19 January 2008, 03:34 AM   #1
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The Dream: By: AmericanIdiot

"Good Morning" my mother shouted. I woke up on my first day of school. I went to the
bathroom and showered as any other day. I went up stairs to get my everyday breakfast
bar. I took a look at the kitchen clock. It was already 7:45 and I had to get to
school early. I ran to the bus stop right as the bus pulled in. I found a seat next
my bestfriend, Felicity. We have been friends since diaper days. We started talking
about  how many cute guys there would be in school. I looked around the bus if I
could see any of the guys. I didn't see any, but then as I turned around I saw an
amazingly cute guy in the seat directly behind me. Felicity kept tapping my shoulder
and I gazed into space. He was like no other boy I have seen before. Felicity soon
got my attention and asked me who I was staring at. I told her, "A really hot guy
sitting behind us!" She  turned around to look at him and she giggled. I turned
around to see what she was laughing about and it turns out he was a nerd. I saw him
put on his really nerdy glasses. Felicity and I ended up laughing our heads off
until we got the the school. Once we arrived, I was so nervous that I wanted to hurl
so I could just go home. I looked at the school's sign. It read as 'Walnut Grove
Middle School" as Felicity and I walked through the door the fire alarm started to
ring. We ran out the door to see what was going on and it turns out that the school
was on fire. We heard the fire engines just down the street heading our way. The
principal, Mrs. Webster came outside to tell us to all go home. Felicity and I used
our cell phones to call our parents and ask them if they could come and pick us up.
The next week I woke up watching the televison and on the news they reported that
the school will be closed until all damage is repaired. I was suprized that it was
going to take the whole school year to repair the school. Since there are no other
schools in the area, we couldn't be schooled unless our parents gave up there jobs
to teach us at home. I sat in bed and fell asleep. I woke up and I realized that it
was all a dream! I went to shower and went up stairs, my mom had told me that it was
the first day of school! I was so happy! I thought i would be bored for the rest of my
life
Thanx for the stories

19 January 2008, 03:41 AM   #2
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Hannah AND Emily    
Chapter 1: Talk. Talk. Talk.
One day there was a girl named Hanna and her best friend Emily. They were talking on the
phone right now. “Hi is Emily there?”  Hannah asked Emily’s mother. “Yes she is.
One moment please.” Emily’s mother said as she handed the phone to Emily. “Hello?”
 She said. “Hey Emily its Hannah! What’s up?” said Hannah. “Ahhhh, nothing much
Hannah. What’s up with you? Anything new?”  Said Emily. “Actually there is!”
Hannah said. “Okay tell me!” said Emily.           


Chapter 2: Now they find out.
“Well okay. I found this book. And it, well it said to follow this map. And I was
wondering, do you wana come over and check it out?” Hannah said curiously. “Okay!
I’ll be there in a few minute’s! See yah.” said Emily. “Okay. Bye!” said Hannah.
She waited 8 minute’s and then “Ding dong” the doorbell rang! It was Emily!
“Hey!” they both said at the same time. “Come! I want to show you the book! Come
on!”  Said Hannah. “Okay, okay. Let me take off my shoes!”
Said Emily. “Okay here’s the map. Now let’s go!” Hannah said.


Chapter 3: let’s go!
“Okay! It say’s to go into a cave. Ohhh! There is a cave right here! Let’s go in! 
Said Hannah. “Okay were…. Ohhhh wow! It’s beautiful!”  Said Emily.” Yeah! I
wonder what we have to do now.” said Emily. “Well let’s take a look at the map.”
said Hannah. “Okay!” said Emily. “Okay, it says to go in the cave and go out the
other way. Then we will find a round object. Pick it up. It will help you throughout the
journey.” said Hannah. “Okay…. well, I found a blue round object.” said Emily.
“That’s it! Pick it up!!” Said Hannah “Okay, I did.”
Said Emily.

Chapter 4: What happens next?
“Wow! It glowed!! Oh my gosh!” said Emily. “Yeah. Now let’s focus.  It say’s to
jump in a puddle. Any puddle.” Hannah said. “But I can’t get these wet!” said
Emily. “Hush up and let me finish. Okay it say’s you WON’T GET WET! Okay? Happy?
Look it say’s it here.” Hannah said as she pointed to the map. “Okay, okay, okay. I
believe you now.” Emily said. Then they both jumped into a puddle and came in this
different world.

Chapter 5:  The new world.
So then, Hannah and Emily went into there new world and they explored it a lot! “Up
top!” said Hannah. “Right on!” said Emily and they did a high five. Then they went
into the woods. They found a bear talking to a rabbit! The bear said “Well it was nice
doing business with you. I’m sure the prophecy will surly happen soon.” then the
rabbit said excitedly “Alright! I can’t wait to meet the people from the ‘other
side’!” Hannah and Emily were confused! They didn’t know about any prophecy and they
didn’t know what “other side” they were talking about! So then, Hannah and Emily
went to the bear.  “Excuse me?” Hannah said to the bear. “Yes?” the bear said.

Chapter 6: Another conversation.
“We just came here from a puddle and we have no idea what this world is. Do you think
you can help us? I also herd you talking to a rabbit about a prophecy. Do you mind showing
us around a little please?”  Hannah said. Then the bear said “You… you are the
prophecy! Wow! I have bin waiting centuries! Many centuries!” then Hannah and Emily said
at the same time “What prophecy are you talking about?”
 
               
Chapter 7: The prophecy.
“The prophecy said that two kids will come from the other side. When you came through
the puddle, you came into here right? Said the bear. “Yes. We did.” Hannah and Emily
said at the same time.  Then the bear said “And then the prophecy said you …..
You….. You….” “US WHAT?” Hannah and Emily screamed. “You are the prophecy!
But… But…But" the bear said. "BOUT WHAT?}
HANNAH AND Emily    
Chapter 1: Talk. Talk. Talk.
One day there was a girl named Hanna and her best friend Emily. They were talking on the
phone right now. “Hi is Emily there?”  Hannah asked Emily’s mother. “Yes she is.
One moment please.” Emily’s mother said as she handed the phone to Emily. “Hello?”
 She said. “Hey Emily its Hannah! What’s up?” said Hannah. “Ahhhh, nothing much
Hannah. What’s up with you? Anything new?”  Said Emily. “Actually there is!”
Hannah said. “Okay tell me!” said Emily.           


Chapter 2: Now they find out.
“Well okay. I found this book. And it, well it said to follow this map. And I was
wondering, do you wana come over and check it out?” Hannah said curiously. “Okay!
I’ll be there in a few minute’s! See yah.” said Emily. “Okay. Bye!” said Hannah.
She waited 8 minute’s and then “Ding dong” the doorbell rang! It was Emily!
“Hey!” they both said at the same time. “Come! I want to show you the book! Come
on!”  Said Hannah. “Okay, okay. Let me take off my shoes!”
Said Emily. “Okay here’s the map. Now let’s go!” Hannah said.


Chapter 3: let’s go!
“Okay! It say’s to go into a cave. Ohhh! There is a cave right here! Let’s go in! 
Said Hannah. “Okay were…. Ohhhh wow! It’s beautiful!”  Said Emily.” Yeah! I
wonder what we have to do now.” said Emily. “Well let’s take a look at the map.”
said Hannah. “Okay!” said Emily. “Okay, it says to go in the cave and go out the
other way. Then we will find a round object. Pick it up. It will help you throughout the
journey.” said Hannah. “Okay…. well, I found a blue round object.” said Emily.
“That’s it! Pick it up!!” Said Hannah “Okay, I did.”
Said Emily.

Chapter 4: What happens next?
“Wow! It glowed!! Oh my gosh!” said Emily. “Yeah. Now let’s focus.  It say’s to
jump in a puddle. Any puddle.” Hannah said. “But I can’t get these wet!” said
Emily. “Hush up and let me finish. Okay it say’s you WON’T GET WET! Okay? Happy?
Look it say’s it here.” Hannah said as she pointed to the map. “Okay, okay, okay. I
believe you now.” Emily said. Then they both jumped into a puddle and came in this
different world.

Chapter 5:  The new world.
So then, Hannah and Emily went into there new world and they explored it a lot! “Up
top!” said Hannah. “Right on!” said Emily and they did a high five. Then they went
into the woods. They found a bear talking to a rabbit! The bear said “Well it was nice
doing business with you. I’m sure the prophecy will surly happen soon.” then the
rabbit said excitedly “Alright! I can’t wait to meet the people from the ‘other
side’!” Hannah and Emily were confused! They didn’t know about any prophecy and they
didn’t know what “other side” they were talking about! So then, Hannah and Emily
went to the bear.  “Excuse me?” Hannah said to the bear. “Yes?” the bear said.

Chapter 6: Another conversation.
“We just came here from a puddle and we have no idea what this world is. Do you think
you can help us? I also herd you talking to a rabbit about a prophecy. Do you mind showing
us around a little please?”  Hannah said. Then the bear said “You… you are the
prophecy! Wow! I have bin waiting centuries! Many centuries!” then Hannah and Emily said
at the same time “What prophecy are you talking about?”
 
               
Chapter 7: The prophecy.
“The prophecy said that two kids will come from the other side. When you came through
the puddle, you came into here right? Said the bear. “Yes. We did.” Hannah and Emily
said at the same time.  Then the bear said “And then the prophecy said you …..
You….. You….” “US WHAT?” Hannah and Emily screamed. “You can't get out unless
you MAKE your own WORLD pool or find one in the sky..." The bear said. "WHAT?" Hannah and
Emily said.
















TO BE CONTINUED!

19 January 2008, 03:46 AM   #3
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Joined: 18 Jan 2008
Posts: 13
CHAPTER ONE
Staring out the window i hear my teacher call my name, "Mystique!" I snap back into
reality and look at Mrs. Milano, my math teacher. " What?" I ask flatly, she rolls her
eyes,"What is the awnser to pie times 3.35? AND NO CALCULATOR!" I just stare at her
blankly, a trick i learned in 4th grade. She scoffs, "DETENTION!! AFTER SCHOOL!! MY
HOMEROOM!!! FOR 1 WEEK!!!!!!" I just turn my head back toward the window, there is no way
in hell i'm going to that detention. Besides, i know why i'm the only one she picks on.
I'm not a cheerleader, i don't run, i don't play sports, and i sure as hell don't respect
all the jocks and preps in this school. In fact, im the opposite of what this school
wants, I have Orange-blonde-blue hair, cut short and spikey in back, bangs over my eyes,
lip pierced, black eyeliner, dark jeans, and long sleeves all the time. I  have a
disfunctional life, and if i had i family, they would be disfunctional too. The fact is,
my mom left me all alone with my dad, my dad left me all alone with my little brother,
Tommy, and my little sister, Chelsea. Well, my dad didn't really leave, he is just never
here, and when he is, he brings home strippers. After dreading on all day i went to
Lincoln Elementary to pick up Chelsea and Tommy. When i got there they were sitting on
the steps with their teacher, Miss Miller.  They are twins and do everything together,
but usually it involves me helping. We walked home and i got some hamburger out of the
freezer, at least we had food, because money was short in this house i  had to use
everything wisely, and work. "Im huuuuuuungryy!" I heard tommy whine and soon after
Chelsea was whining too.  the burgers were finally done and  i sat down to eat with the
kids, before leaving for work. At least they were 10, old enough to watch themselves.
After going to work and earning $2.50 an hour i went home to find Chelsea and Tommy
asleep on the couch. At least i could carry them to the only bed we had. 
CHAPTER TWO
The next morning i was called into the office and was told my father was there, to see
me. After i went into the principal's office i knew something was wrong. Dad was there
with Chelsea and Tommy, he must have gotten them from school too. After sitting in the
office for what seemed like forever we went home with dad and he told the twins to go in
their room. "Mystique Jade Mclauren!" he yelled and i could see his anger bubbling. "I
havn't had any goods in 12 days!" I knew what was coming,  goods ment, drugs or sex. He
thought he could get one or the other from me. "And guess who is old enough to get it for
me?!" He bellowed, making me flinch. "Daddy please!" I yelled feeling smaller and smaller
with each breath. He put his hand on my shoulder, making me shake with fear. then he
pulled on my shirt, grinning the whole time. I pulled away and his face went red. I went
to the twins room slammed the door and locked it. "Sissy! What's happening?!" Chelsea
yelled and i held up my finger telling her to be quiet. We went out the window and
through the back yard. And the whole time ikept thinking, so this is what its come to.
And i think I know the answer. My dad, My own dad, wants to have sex with me. No supprise
though, i knew it would come to this one day, and now, because of me, my siblings and i
can never go back. Suddenly reality hit me, not like a pat on the back, though, it hit me
like a slap in the face. We were 3 kids, ages 13,10,and 10, we had no house, no food, no
water,and no family.
Soon,i thought, we would have no breath in us, we would be--DEAD.
And I think That's Exactly what dad wanted. So that he could have our leftover money all
to him self. GOOD! Let him have it, we'll...um...then the idea hit me...MOM! After
walking down all the back streets the twins were complaining, and it was killing me.
Finally we found a forest. "Well, guys, it's home sweet home now." I said, no so
enthusiasticly. The twins both had tears in their big brown eyes, "NO!" they screamed at
once. Then i told them something i shouldn't have, "We are going to find mom!" I told
them.
CHAPTER THREE
 We then we all gathered pine needles and went to sleep. Luckily it didnt get cold at
night. When i woke up the next morning Chelsea was wide awake staring at me. "Chelse, how
long have you been up?" I asked sitting up. "I couldn't sleep and didn't sleep." She said
still staring at me. I hugged her, "I'm sorry, i am so so sorry!" We wouldn't be here if
it wasn't for me. and i knew that. "I JUST WANT TO GO HOME!" Chelsea said and i gave her
a smypathedic look. "Okay, but you guys are staying out of sight, i wil go in, get
supplies and get out, then we HAVE  to go. OKAY?" She smiled a little smile, i
knew it was fake.  "Okay." she murmered.
Thanx for the stories

19 January 2008, 07:02 PM   #4
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Joined: 18 Jan 2008
Posts: 13
Charlotte Hathaway...
My name is Charlotte Hathaway,
 I’m thirteen years old. I have a lovely home; I felt so lucky I have everything. My
parents love me very much. I think I’m the happiest girl in the world. I do like
feeding
the birds in the morning and study at night; I have a loving best friend and we’re
getting along well with each other. The most things I like to do is reading; but mostly
partying and shopping…
 This is the story of me and the day I lost something very special.

Chapter 1
The Beginning of the End

 I heard my parents arguing, shouting and calling names in an adult way then I requested
they should go on a second honeymoon I can’t stand it if they’re fighting. They
decided
yes because they got relationship problems. Good thing; I want the house for my-self but,
I decided to change my mind when they decided to leave me alone with my Nan Patty, I
think
I’m already old enough to stay on my own but, the last time it happened I was almost
kid-napped; Nan Patty works with my  parents for about three years, she won’t change; I
miss my old Nanny she’s even nicer than Mary Poppins her-self, but, she is gone because
she was getting married; she said she will come back but, never…..

 Sometimes I call my Nan Patty; Aunt Patty; she acts that she loves me in front of my
parents but no…. no and never; she’s the meanest person I’ve ever met more meaner
than my
Best friend’s Step Mother, when there’s a loud thumping noise at the door you will
definitely know that it’s my Nan Patty I still could smell the celery bacon-cheese
onion
sandwich she ate in her last baby-sit and I think I’m going to throw-up if she’s going
to
open her mouth. My Aunt Patty never takes a bath; she’s wearing the same clothes since
the
last two years. I wave goodbye to my parents and wept, then I done an act grin to my mum,
but I can’t help crying,
 ‘’don’t cry dear we won’t die’’ I said goodbye and wave a kiss. When it was
clear, my
aunt pushed me and told me to prepare her dinner.
You know deep down my Nan Patty maybe nice, NOT!

  Weeks come of torture and then Worst, I heard bad news from the police
‘’I’m very sorry dear your parents had an accident they’ve been crushed by an
avalanche
while they are skiing in New York winter wild life park were really sorry, the adult with
you now, will have your house’’. I was terrified what the police said; I don’t know
what
to do, so I said in a trembling voice ‘’Yes’’…
Nothing much happened after that day, I stood weeping….
It was much worst having to stay here with my big mean nanny ‘’hey char (that’s my
nickname I absolutely hate it if she calls me char) Stop crying and finish washing the
toilets and cook my lunch’’, She didn’t even care that my mum and dad died since
she’s
the adult with me, she took over our house so I became her slave (in some sort). 
I cried and cried two big problems in the world. ‘’What am I going to do now’’?
Maybe
Aunt Patty planed all of these… I thought and… then suddenly…
‘’You should prove your parents are alive’’said a voice out of no where,   
‘’Who are you’’? I asked and there was no answer
I stood quietly and thought that my parents are important even if the voice is true or
not, this might sound mushy for a teen-ager but I watched enough drama shows to show your
parents are fairly important!
I love my parents very much. I must pack, I told my self, and I’m running away
tomorrow.
I’m going to pack my things: clothes, map, clean underwear, my books, sun screen,
saving
money (£70.00), a picture of my mum and dad and my pencil and notebook, Tissues I might
get sick, Last of all my sleeping bag and comfy pillow. 
‘’What you doing char’’, asked my Aunt Patty (evil like).
‘’Um nothing Aunt Patty’’, I lied; and waited for her to come out, so slowly I
came out
of the window with my suitcase and rode my bike.
My bike has a compartment at the left that looks like a big basket so I carefully
suitcase in it.

I decided to visit my Best friend (Jane) to ask her if she could come with me. She lives
with her step-Mother her life is like Cinderella without a happy ending she told me.
‘’Jane’’! I called her in her window, ‘’would you like to run-away with me and
find my
parents’’! Ooops I said it out to loud I thought to my self.
 
Nobody answered I slowly walked at the back of their house to see if she’s there,
But I instead I saw her step-mother smooching with the mail-man. I quickly ran behind the
bush before they notice me but, I’m too late they grabbed me in my shoulders and put me
in
a room and said, ‘’we will lock you up here until you’re aunt Patty finds you just
to be
safe’’, finally they left and locked me in the room. My aunt Patty would never care
to
find me. I still can’t believe my best friend’s step Mother is dating with a Mail-man
who
give our letters every-day. I just can’t understand why they hate me, now how could I
get
out of here I thought then a sound terrifying came at the door like Aunt Patty trying to
open the door but it was just Jane my best friend.

‘’Charlotte what are you doing here’’
‘’ You cannot believe what I just saw, your step-mother is dating the mail-man’’.
’’What’’. Jane shouted in despair, ‘’my step Mother is dating the mail-man, oh
my gosh’’
How did you know such things’’ 
‘’Never mind that silly thing I got a problem would you help me find my parents’’.
‘’what
do you mean find your parents’’ she ask anxiously then I told her everything about
it,
start from were the police called. ‘’So would you like to help me’’
‘’no wait you didn’t tell me why you’re here’’.
 ‘’I was here because I need your help; and because, your step-mother caught me
watching
her with the mail-man so she decided to lock me here to keep their secret safe so again
do you like to help me find my parents, and maybe you could find your dad as well’’.
 ‘’Yes; but my dad I think it’s impossible he got lost and ever since he never come
back
from a trip to New York.
 ‘’And that’s just where we are going; in New York’’
 ‘’but why New York ‘’ because that’s where my parents are and that’s where
your dad is;
duh? ‘’ (just a coincidence yes or no)
‘’oh yeh, but how … so what am I going to bring aha!’’. (Sleeping bag, comfy
pillow and
savings money (£50.00) clothes, and crisp, finally clean underwear and binoculars)
 

We swiftly ran to our bikes just parked in between our houses and head to the national
park, Jane behind me and a start to a new adventure.

‘’What are we doing in the park Charlotte’’. Jane asked me.
‘’To think of a way to New-York ’’!
‘’You mean you don’t know where NEW YORK is! You shouldn’t have got me in to this
problem
from the start’’ Jane spat out. 
‘’Stop Spitting and don’t panic’’. 
‘’sorry, but you didn’t told me you don’t know where New York is we could be in
trouble,
the sophistications of a teen-ager is very important’’.
‘’Hey! Hey! Don’t worry I got a Map so It’s 974 Kilometers away from Columbia to
New
York, Ok Should we take the Bus’’. 
‘’The bus, Are you nuts? , We can’t go to New York Using the bus it will take ,
weeks or
months (if it’s slow) Only a fast something Will get us there in time’’.
‘’I know someone who could get us there in no time’’!

Betty, My mum’s half sister she’s so rich and she might maybe have a fast car or
something to help us go to New York. I knocked at the door then a tall looking lady came
out ‘’yes how can I help you’’ the lady said seriously. 
‘’Were looking for Betty is she here’’? I asked anxiously. 
‘’She’s busy so get a way’’.
‘’But we really need her I’m her half Niece.
 ‘’Did you say half Niece’’. 
‘’Yes’’, 
‘’I’ll ask ‘’.
 ‘’Who’s down there Grace’’ said a voice coming from up stairs.
‘’It’s your said to be half Niece Madam’’
‘’oh let them in ’’ she said in a husky voice.
I was so exited I haven’t seen my Aunt Betty since I was eight years old but suddenly I
felt scared she might be different after all I heard her voice just now, it just sound
very weird, As I Come in I saw an angel She’s pretty, short blonde hair, curling eye
lashes, red angel lips. ‘’sorry for what I’m wearing dear I was just doing some
modeling
and sorry if I scared you with my voice I was just a little husky after drinking my
home-made carrot juice, want a taste’’. 
‘’No thank you Aunt Betty but how did you know I was scared of your voice’’.
‘’well every
week-ends I always drink carrot juice after my modeling and some how, every time I got a
visitor on week-ends they always run, but for the first time ever you and your friend
didn’t run away’’. 
‘’Is your job modeling’’! 
‘’Yes but I also have another job’’.
Thanx for the stories

21 January 2008, 02:15 AM   #5
SPBW (Senior Professional book writer)
Joined: 18 Jan 2008
Posts: 13
By: Laura Tran, asian_purple_218
Forewords
Characters:
Luchia-Pink Pearl Mermaid
Hanon-Aquamarine Blue Pearl Mermaid
Rina-Green Pearl Mermaid 
Noel-Blue Pearl Mermaid
Coco-Yellow Pearl Mermaid
Sara-Orange Pearl Mermaid
Seira-Mangarine Pearl Mermaid
Karen-Purple Pearl Mermaid
Aqua Regina Sama- White Angel Queen Pearl Mermaid
Katio Chan- Aqua's Fiance

Chapter 1
Aqua Regina Sama was the Queen of the Pearl Mermaids. She was really beautiful.
Katio-Chan wanted to marry her  , but Aqua refused  . Then Katio-Chan got
really mad  and then turned into a villian. Katio-Chan was trying to steal her pearl
and her mermaid's pearls. Once Katio-Chan had almost catched her pearl. But, he missed.
Then, Katio-Chan did capture her pearl and Katio-Chan made her in a very deep sleep and
make her dead and warn the Mermaids about her funeral, but she didn't die, but Aqua did
got sent to the Heavens. Then the mermaids sang there songs with courage and love to
awaken Aqua from her deep sleep. And then, Aqua was seened right in front of them! Their
song worked. And then, Katio-Chan were never seened again, but Katio-Chan's last words
were "You'll change you mind of marrying me!" said Katio-Chan.Aqua Regina-Sama defeated
jim with one hit out of her Mistic Wand. Then Kaito-Chan was away from the Solar
Stystem.
Chapter 2
Finally all of the Mermaids were glad that Kaito-Chan was Far Far Far Away from the
Solar Stystem. As they all went inside the classroom, they wnet to there seats and 9 new
boys were in there class. Each Mermaid had a crush on each one. They all went on dates,
but Aqua's crush looked like Katio-Chan, but he was not him. Katio-Chan had white hair,
but the guy Aqua liked, was Blonde.
One day, They all went on a date on a Ship. Aqua was totally in love  . It was an
All-Time Chance for Aqua's crush.
Chapter 3
Many Years later, all of the 9 Mermaids crushes, ask them all to Marry them. They all
said "Yes", even Aqua. And their Married is on the same day, and have you ever heard of a
9-Twine-Marriage? Now, you do. They broke a World Record of a lot of people on the same
time of Marragie. The windows crashed. Katio-Chan was in the building. "Stop it you
fiance's of Aqua! I'm her True Love"said Kaito-Chan. "Don't worry Aqua, I'll protect you"
Aqua's Fiance told Aqua. Aqua scurried to the wall where she was safe. Then Kaito-Chan
and
the Fiance of Aqua were fighting each other. People all left, but the Fiance's of 9
mermaids, 9 Mermaids, and Katio-Chan, all in there Human Form. "Stop it! I'll decide who
should be my Fiance nad not by Duel!" said Aqua. Then, Aqua told them to go to the
Mermaid Castle Center Card Area. "We will solve this at a Card Battle of Pokers!" said
Aqua. Then they started.
Chapter 4
When the game stopped, Katio-Chan won. The fiance's of Aqua was sad   . "Aqua, since
I have won this Card Game, you you Marry me?" said Katio-Chan. Aqua had no choice.
"I-I-I Du-o, I do"said Aqua. Kaito-Chan took a ring out of a miniture box out of a bag.
It was a Golden ring. He slid it on Aqua's finger. Then he planed their wedding for
Tomorrow.
Chapter 5
Kaito-Chan and Aqua's wedding was today. As Kaito-Chan said "I do", Aqua said "I do,
too". They all went to a Car to a House for them. The 8 mermaids annoyed Katio-Chan and
Aqua because they were married. And they all just realized Kaito-Chan was not a villian
anymore. And the last of all, Aqua was Marrying Forgiveness.

The End
Thanx for the stories

21 January 2008, 05:42 PM   #6
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The Brave Tikal Princess

Once apon a time lived a 11 year old princess. She lived on one of the three tallest
tikal temple, Tikal Temple I. 
She lived a happy life playing with her rich and poor friends. She was
smart,funny and caring to her people. It said in the stories one princess brave
enough was to defeat a terrible beast. She was scared if it would choose her. But
her family said to be brave if chosen. Once she became 18 she was choosen. The
council leaders said that she is ready. The leaders described the beast like this:
 Rojo was a teribble beast who heart was as cold as ice. His whole body was red and
with fur. His eyes were
yellow like lemons and his teeth and claws were like sissors ready to cut someone
open. As she was preparing a sudden
vioce appered. It was a ghoust. At first she screamed but the ghoust said not to
fear, she says she will help her on her quest.
As she said that three magical things appered infront of the princess. The ghoust
told her what they were and how to use them. There was
a golden sword, a shining sheild and a bag to carry food and supplies. The princess
thanked the ghoust and headed off. She used the map
she had to find where Rojo was. It said she must cross throught bushes, dodge arrows
and then go in his cave and defeat him there.
When she got to the bushes they were to thick. So she got her golden sword and cut
through all the bucshes. Then she reached to where
arrows starting shooting at her. She used her shield to cover herself and she made
it out. Now time to go in the cave. But before she went in
she saw a posinous fruit. As she looked at it she had an idea. She went in to the
cave slowly then she threw the fruit into it, then she heard someone eating the
fruit. It was Rojo! As he finished he started to choke. So when he did she swooped
down and cut his head off. And there he lay there dead. Then she came back to Tikal
where her family and friends were cheering her on. The the had a celebration on her
victory and there she was crown Queen Tikal. And she lived a happy and long life.

By Sasori_fan_girl

21 January 2008, 06:44 PM   #7
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Thanks for Posting my Story namaone! ^^
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21 January 2008, 07:07 PM   #8
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By: Laura Tran, asian_purple_218
Forewords
Characters:
Luchia-Pink Pearl Mermaid
Hanon-Aquamarine Blue Pearl Mermaid
Rina-Green Pearl Mermaid 
Noel-Blue Pearl Mermaid
Coco-Yellow Pearl Mermaid
Sara-Orange Pearl Mermaid
Seira-Mangarine Pearl Mermaid
Karen-Purple Pearl Mermaid
Aqua Regina Sama- White Angel Queen Pearl Mermaid
Katio Chan- Aqua's Fiance

Chapter 1
Aqua Regina Sama was the Queen of the Pearl Mermaids. She was really beautiful.
Katio-Chan wanted to marry her  , but Aqua refused  . Then Katio-Chan got
really mad  and then turned into a villian. Katio-Chan was trying to steal her
pearl and her mermaid's pearls. Once Katio-Chan had almost catched her pearl. But, he
missed. Then, Katio-Chan did capture her pearl and Katio-Chan made her in a very deep
sleep and make her dead and warn the Mermaids about her funeral, but she didn't die,
but Aqua did got sent to the Heavens. Then the mermaids sang there songs with courage
and love to awaken Aqua from her deep sleep. And then, Aqua was seened right in front
of them! Their song worked. And then, Katio-Chan were never seened again, but
Katio-Chan's last words were "You'll change you mind of marrying me!" said
Katio-Chan.Aqua Regina-Sama defeated jim with one hit out of her Mistic Wand. Then
Kaito-Chan was away from the Solar Stystem.
Chapter 2
Finally all of the Mermaids were glad that Kaito-Chan was Far Far Far Away from
the Solar Stystem. As they all went inside the classroom, they wnet to there seats
and 9 new boys were in there class. Each Mermaid had a crush on each one. They all
went on dates, but Aqua's crush looked like Katio-Chan, but he was not him.
Katio-Chan had white hair, but the guy Aqua liked, was Blonde.
One day, They all went on a date on a Ship. Aqua was totally in love  . It
was an All-Time Chance for Aqua's crush.
Chapter 3
Many Years later, all of the 9 Mermaids crushes, ask them all to Marry them. They
all said "Yes", even Aqua. And their Married is on the same day, and have you ever
heard of a 9-Twine-Marriage? Now, you do. They broke a World Record of a lot of
people on the same time of Marragie. The windows crashed. Katio-Chan was in the
building. "Stop it you fiance's of Aqua! I'm her True Love"said Kaito-Chan. "Don't
worry Aqua, I'll protect you" Aqua's Fiance told Aqua. Aqua scurried to the wall
where she was safe. Then Kaito-Chan and the Fiance of Aqua were fighting each other.
People all left, but the Fiance's of 9 mermaids, 9 Mermaids, and
Katio-Chan, all in there Human Form. "Stop it! I'll decide who should be my Fiance
and not by Duel!" said Aqua. Then, Aqua told them to go to the Mermaid Castle Center
Card Area. "We will solve this at a Card Battle of Pokers!" said Aqua. Then they
started.
Chapter 4
When the game stopped, Katio-Chan won. The fiance's of Aqua was sad   . "Aqua,
since I have won this Card Game, you you Marry me?" said Katio-Chan. Aqua had no
choice.
"I-I-I Du-o, I do"said Aqua. Kaito-Chan took a ring out of a miniture box out of a
bag. It was a Golden ring. He slid it on Aqua's finger. Then he planed their wedding
for Tomorrow.
Chapter 5
Kaito-Chan and Aqua's wedding was today. As Kaito-Chan said "I do", Aqua said "I
do, too". They all went to a Car to a House for them. The 8 mermaids annoyed
Katio-Chan and Aqua because they were married. And they all just realized Kaito-Chan
was not a villian anymore. And the last of all, Aqua was Marrying Forgiveness.

The End
Thanx for the stories

22 January 2008, 12:08 AM   #9
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Joined: 18 Jan 2008
Posts: 13
Raise Your Voice

Chapter 1
  Leslie St Clair was lost in the music. Love is incredible...It rises above
everyone... She couldn't help, but singing the song she had just wrote. She knew that
her dream to be a singer was coming true. However she also knew that she needed a band.
Luckily, her mom and dad got her a mini recording studio in her room, so even without a
band she could rock out.

  Her best friend, Kira aka Kiwi, almost mastered the electric guitar. They were so
hoping to get a scholarship to the MAC or the Music Academy of California. But, since
they didn't have a band, they could not enter for one. R-r-ring!!! "Hello?" Leslie
answered her Samsung cellphone by Verizon. "Hey. OMG! I mastered the electric guitar, so
I
am coming over to rock out tonight. Can I sleepover?" Kiwi said. "Yeah, because my mom
will be out late and Dad is home and he'll say yes." Leslie replied. "Okay, Bye!" Kiwi
said. And Leslie hung up. "Dad!" Leslie screamed, "Can Kiwi sleepover tonight?" "Sure,
sweetie!" her dad said.
Thanx for the stories

26 January 2008, 02:02 AM   #10
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Joined: 18 Jan 2008
Posts: 13
Chapter 1

“ What would you do if you could choose how long you lived, or, choose who you wanted
to
die. I would suggest you should find one of these marvellous creatures. The generally
live-” Tracey  sighed as he threw his copy of “Dealing with Myths” to the ground.
The
whole thing seemed pointless. “ Here I am in the best University in the country,
learning
about fairy tales.” He muttered dryly to himself.  It was all just a heap of rubbish to
him. Stories to show how things worked, how to get children to bed. “ The first sign of
insanity is talking to yourself’ Tracy looked around. He could see no one. ‘ Second
is
hearing it talk back to ya’ Still Tracey could see no one. “Why are you telling me
this?”
“‘Cause, dude. You just broke all of ‘em rules.” He waited for a few minutes,
before
deciding that he was just half-asleep. He then went to be bed, cursing his imagination,
his essay, and his tiredness, wishing that he didn’t have to sleep. 

Chapter 2

‘ It’s hopeless Io, utterly hopeless. The young rythn doesn’t believe, even after
we set him that essay we set him. Just give up. You’ll get your revenge on humans
later.
What’s the point in killing him is he can’t even see you,?’
‘ No, Mai, No. I know he’s the one. He’s the one I need. I can just feel it. I
don’t care
if we has even an ounce of mera in him. I need him here.’ Maia sighed. She always knew
when she was fighting a losing battle. She liked her friend Iosis very much. Sometime she
even compared her to a rythn nor, or a human sister. Io’ was just very stubborn,
strong-minded and bursting with confidence. Just the opposite of her. Although they were
just as sceming as each other. ‘ Have you asked Half Moon about it?’
‘ She didn’t sound that confident when she talked to him last night....’ She
stopped. She
could see Iosis’s eyes blaring into her. What would she give for those eyes. A smile
lit
her face. Just thinking about body made her think about the Gray Sisters accident a
couple 5000 years ago. She and Io had vowed not to talk about it, but still, that was
great, watching their smug faces as suddenly, half of their body parts were gone. She
giggled. ‘ This isin’t funny, Mai! I really need to do something. I can’t just sit
here,and let them inhabitate the world, with their stupid smelly faces!’
‘Stupid....smelly faces? Even I could do something better than that!’
“You guys fightin’?” Io and Mai turned around.
"Half-Moon?"
"Yeah, that's me!" "Anyways, just wanted to tell ya I'm so tired from last night."
"And what is that got to do with us?"
"'Cause I'm way to tired to do duty tonight. I'm gonna go crash."
"Isin't it your turn tonight?
"Yes, didn't you miss it last time!"
"I needed to. You know that. C'mon...please?"
"No-"
"Okay, we'll go. But we're never covering for you again." Io stared at her.
"Thanks! Peace out!"
Thanx for the stories

27 January 2008, 03:48 AM   #11
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Joined: 18 Jan 2008
Posts: 13
13 years ago
   "Please, no, stay away!" Anna ran with her newborn girl as she was chased through the
forest. "Charles, where are you?" 
   "Anna! I'm over here!" Anna followed his voice. "I've found a village for our child,
near the coast!" Charles went to Anna and led her away from the mob of villagers.
   "Oh, thank heavens," Anna saw the village her husband mentioned. "Are you sure it's
safe?" There was a hint of worry in her voice. "Will she be safe?"
  "She will, for certain," Charles ensured her. As they layed their child in front of a
recently married couple's home, they left a note saying:
   Please take care of this child, born Friday, October 13th. Her name is Olivia.
Raise her well.
                                                   Anna and Charles Marcilus   
   Anna and Charles kissed their child good-bye and fled into the night. As they left,
their child wept until it fell asleep. A little ways off, a rainstorm was flooding a
nearby village.
Thanx for the stories

27 January 2008, 02:17 PM   #12
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Posts: 13
Seven
Chapter 1
The Darkness Is Looming
Kitty Mendu couldn't wait for her trip to New York. She had spent 2 hours packing with her
sister, Linda.
"Whoo! One week! With shopping, boys and no parents." Linda suddenly hugged Kitty with
joy.
"Whoa! Chill-ax! Lindy, it's a week, with Alex and Hunter! No one special." Kitty smiled.
She had a crush on Hunter Forest since Year 9. Seeing as they were in Year 11 and so close
to finishing, Linda had asked Hunter on a date in New York for Kitty. He had said yes.
"No. No one special." Linda mocked her.
"Hmm, it's not nearly as funny when it's done to me." Kitty said, her mind wandered, she
set her eyes on the mirror, a reflection of a tree branch shadow was swaying softly over
Linda, Kitty gasped and spun round.
"Whats up, chick?" Linda asked her, Kitty stared at her twin in fright and fear. "YOu look
like you've seen a ghost."
"Oh, that's silly! Not a ghost." Kitty laughed nervously. "Just something totally evil..."
She whispered the last bit and flung her best top in suitcase, the sleeve covered up the
words Yourosa Gonnavich Loseinny Heromaso, to spell the words Your Gonna Lose Her......
Thanx for the stories

2 February 2008, 04:24 PM   #13
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Posts: 13
Jason Mooker woke up with a bad feeling deep inside. Today is the first day of his last
year in middle school, and he is very afraid. You would be to if you would have been made
fun of all your life! Slipping out of bed, he starting thinking about what could go
wrong.
 I bet he could conjour up a list that is about 5 inches long! Jason walked along the
steep hallway of his house, heading towards the bathroom to get ready for school. When he
opened the bathroom door, Amber scurried by him and went into the bathroom, shutting the
door in Jason's face. "Hey Amber! I was there first!" He called, annoyed. Amber barelly
opened the door and said, "So? Now I am here and you have to wait Stink! HA!" Stink is
what Amber called Jason. "JERK!" He screamed through the door. "What is going on?" Came
his mother's voice. Shyly turning around, he answered, "Amber keeps on hogging the
bathroom! I'm going to be late for school!" Jason's mother stared at him, then sighed.
"Jason, you must understand, getting ready for the day is a girls biggest job. She will
complain if she doesnt think she looks good!" Jason frowned. Why does his sister get
whatever she wants? Just then, Jason's dad came around the corner, and yelled,
"Jeena! Get ready for school! We have to go!" Jeena's door opened, and out came is
sister. "Dad, I'm ready! Let's go!" And followed her dad out to the car. Jason was soon
let in to the bathroom. But he was going to be late.
    About 20 minutes later, Jason was rushing to school, his knapsack banging against his
side when he ran. When he was at school, Josh popped beside him, and said with a sigh,
"Why are you always late, Jas? This fued between you and your sister has gotta stop!"
Jason smirked at his undernegleted friend. "Easy for you to say! You are a only child!"
Then he sighed. The 2 minute warning bell came on, making Jason jump. He gathered his
senses and started running through the halls to get to his class. Luckly, he didnt run
into the hall monitor or a teacher. He was still late to class though, and had gotten a
detention slip. Everyone was snickering at him, which made him feeled embarrased. Jason
walked to the back of the room, and sat down with a plop. As soon as he sat down, he
jumped to his feet. Laying on the seat, was a dumb little tack. Even more embarrased, he
threw it away, and sat back down. A girl beside him smiled. Let me say that Jason already
had a crush on the first day of school, and she was it!
Her hair was long and blonde. She had baby blue eyes that sparkled in the sun. 2 red
ribbons were in her hair, holding up 2 long piggy tails. Her outfit was a silky smooth
purple dress, with straps and a purple bow on each strap. She had on purple leggings and
golden slippers. Almost like a Angel. He thought. Soon, class had started.
      In about the middle of Biology, the second glass of the day, Jason was caught
day-dreaming. I mean, he couldnt help it. He kept dreaming about the beautiful girl that
was in homeroom. His dream kinda went like this:

He walked into homeroom, one monday afternoon,and thier was the girl in a wedding
dress. Jason was muscular and absolutely handsome. Her friends were putting on the
finishing touches on her sparkly, white outfit. Smiling, she stand up and walked to where
Jason was standing. She stared in his deep brown eyes, and said, "Jason, will you be
my-"

That's about when he was caught. And next thing he knew. He got hit with double
detention. Which is, by the way, pretty bad!
Thanx for the stories

2 February 2008, 11:25 PM   #14
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I wanted to write a story. a different one. So here is a shortish one!


  Ariana glanced up at the starry sky, wishing for a way to get out of this drafty house.
She could see that the full moon were shining brightly, as if to say, "Come on! You must
come out in the meadow." But She knew her mother wouldnt let her outside at this late.
Ariana looked at the clock, 11:42. "Ariana, what are you doing?" came a all too familar
voice. turning around, she saw her best friend, Aylia, at the doorway. "Your mother let me
in, Ariana. She said I could sleepover tonight. So, I'm here now. What do you wanna do?"
Ariana took a minute to look back out the window, and said, almost in a whisper, "Aylia,
come closer and see the forest in the deep south, whistling with the wind. The meadow that
crosses all the country side. Look at the creek and that's just begging us to come closer.
We must follow it!" Aylia sighed and said, annoyed,"Not this again Ariana! You know I do
not believe in fairy tales of this sort. Come on and lets play in the loft." She tried to
get Ariana off the mahogany chair, but Ariana was frozen like a statue. "Look, Aylia. We
must try to see. C'mon, dont be a party crasher with the deep waters." Ariana standed up
and began to open the window. Aylia shrugged and helped her best friend. Up the window
came, and the both scampered  out.
    "Look, I still think this crazy. But if you must say so, we will go." Aylia said,
almost in a shiver. "But we must be back soon, or trouble will leek upon us." Ariana
couldn't ezactly hear her. She was trapped in the beauty of the green land. Almost as
beautiful as fresh, spring flowers coming up after a good rain. She smelled the fresh air,
and said to her friend, "Come on Aylia, lets go to Woods Creek." Grabbing her hand, Ariana
rushed over to Wood's Creek, what she also calls, The Water Palace. Aylia rectuanly
followed and said, "You know Ariana, this might be actually fun!" Ariana heaved a sigh and
said, "Yes it will. But we wont have much time in this magical land of hope." Aylia rolled
her eyes at her best friend's crazy notions. "Well fine, Ariana. Lets do this!"
Ariana was glad of what Aylia was doing. And by hope, that this magical place will help
them greatfully. "You know Aylia, this is rumored to be the Lake Of The Son Of the Devil.
They also say this creek will grant anyone's greatest wish, no matter what. So, make a
wish." After she said this, Ariana closed her eyes and began wishing her deepest, darkest
wish. Aylia smiled, and she too, started making a wish. But, the bad thing is, Ariana
slipped on some loose rocks and fell into the creek, which is said to be the deepest creek
in the whole world. SPLASH! The noise startled  Aylia so much that she glanced up, to see
what was happening. She took a small glimpse of her best friend, drowning!
   
THE END

7 February 2008, 08:41 PM    #15
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