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11 June 2011, 04:06 AM   #1
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Song/poem in honor of Tawny Smith.R.I.P. :'((



Do you sit in his kingdom,
watching us.

Do you play with fate,
and watch me?

Do you have fun in heaven,
Tawny?

Do you have friends.
in heaven?

Do you have a bedtime,
in heaven?

Do you miss me,
like I miss you?

Do you cry,
like I do?

Do you remember me,
like I remember you?

Do you remember how I saw you,
before you died?

Do you forgive me,
for not swimming with you?

Do you remember the pain,
of drowning?

Do you think about,
what if's?

Do you remember little 7 year old me,
crying at your funeral?

Do you remember me screaming and,
saying why won't she just open her eye's?

Do you know what I did,
crying myself to sleep 3 nights.

Do you know the,
grief I felt?

Do you know I pray to you,
to protect me?

Do you know in my crash,
I saw you?

Do you know your face,
looked so serene?

Do you know the,
warmth I felt?

Do you know I'll join you in 70 years,
give or take.

Do you know that you've,
remained young,while I aged?

Do you remember my promise,
to be friends forever and ever?

Do you know I'm going,
to keep that promise?

Do you remember when,
I'm entering the gates of heaven?

Do you know,
I miss you and still cry about?

Do you know,
I'm 12 now and I still cry?

Do you know,
that was 5 years ago.

Do you know,
it was just seconds and minutes for you?

Do you sit in his kingdom,
watching me,your' mother,brother,father and other family?

Do you listen to our prayers specifically,
whispering in our ear,Tawny?

11 June 2011, 04:48 AM   #2
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c/c welcome 

11 June 2011, 07:19 PM   #3
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This is really good (:
Do you know that you've, remained young,while I aged?
^ That's my favorite part. haha.

11 June 2011, 08:43 PM   #4
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thats really good.... its sad, but good

12 June 2011, 03:17 AM   #5
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Thanks for they feed back 

@NeonStripedNinja

My best friend liked that line to she also liked the last one.I got this done a little bit
after the anniversary of her death.

12 June 2011, 07:15 PM   #6
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@saiharatwin

Awwehh. :/
What happened? If you don't mind sharing...

20 June 2011, 01:16 AM   #7
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She was swimming at the creek and  she got sucked under this mini bridge because the city
knocked the rocks out from under it...

20 June 2011, 08:53 PM   #8
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That's horrible :/
I'm sorry.

21 June 2011, 01:20 AM   #9
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yeah....5 years have gone by so it's not as bad as it use to be..

21 June 2011, 12:42 PM   #10
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i enjoyed reading this...it was beautiful but then again sad...but still

22 June 2011, 10:57 PM   #11
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
Posts: 669
I normally don't read poetry. But this is beautiful, and sad. I loved it. I loved every
single line.

25 June 2011, 04:28 PM    #12
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Thank you guys!I'm glad you liked reading this Best!



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