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11 July 2009, 02:56 PM   #1
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When your all alone in the middle of the night,
what do you think about,
who do you think about,
before your mind wanders into the past the present the opened door of surprise.
Do you think of me, the sea, the orange that was speckled that fell off the tree?
I think about everything and nothing all at once, i think of the flowers and my last
sugar rush.
Your tears as they fall, each one stinging hander and harder, making me more fonder
and fonder.

 I bet you didn't notice my little tips, I bet you didn't notice my short looks
either.
for I am your shadow, your dream, a picture you can never see.
A painting a poster a masked inclosure.

 You forget me from one moment to the next I'm your perfect fantasy only for a bit,
until you realize I'm just me you set me loose as my heart goes free.

this is how i feel.

11 July 2009, 03:16 PM   #2
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thats good.  luved it

31 August 2009, 07:35 PM   #3
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Joined: 23 Dec 2007
Posts: 10
I really enjoyed this entry, your words flowed together like water in a stream. What your
poem is expressing is very clear to me. Good job, this is an excellent poem. Thank you for
posting it.

21 September 2010, 01:13 AM    #4
Joined: 28 Mar 2011
Posts: 0
Here's my poem.

Like A Rainbow

I stand, as still as a chair.
You come close and breathe on my neck.
Then you bring your hands into my hair.
I love the way you treat me like a rainbow.

I kill and see your eyes.
You hold me, my heart throbbing.
And hope that you do not despise.
I love the way you treat me like a rainbow.

I rob and you hate that.
I shake right there.
But you smile as sly as a cat.
I love the way you treat me like a rainbow.



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