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2 July 2009, 01:36 AM   #1
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Ok, so heres the theme:Domestic violence

Get to it kupikians

20+ Lines

5-10 kp

depending on if i like it, well how much i like it

2 July 2009, 07:51 AM   #2
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Entering this one too. xD.
I promise I won't cry anymore, I promise I won't tell my friend, I say as I wipe the blood of the floor, As I hope for this to end. You once used to admire me, Complimenting my eyes and face, How hard is it for you to see? That I just want one last gentle embrace. But in my reflection all I see is you, Like it's not me anymore, And I see all the things that you do, You won't believe the things I saw. I limp slowly up each stair, With you standing behind my back, I hope you enjoy your last scare, Because I swear I'm about to crack. I trip you up behind, And race for the door, But conscienceness you soon find, As I unlock the locks; and scream outside I can't take it anymore. You try to haul me back in, But I struggle outside, I hope you can't repent your sin, Because now you can't hide. Now take one last look, At a woman like me, Think of the last remaining sanity you took, As you set her free. ___ Ehh, Could've been better.

2 July 2009, 01:08 PM   #3
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I'm begging you not to
Leave another sore scar
You've left behind plenty
Already gone too far

I don't understand why you
Have to treat me this way
Nothing really I can do though
You'll just leave more on me today

I've used all the cover up
That I have in my supply
Why don't you just make it quick
And let me just die

You're coming into the room
With your average blind rage
When the beating is over
It will be time to turn the page

Another five bruises
Another ten gashes
It's time to give in
Let me fall to ashes

I pick up the knife
Hold it up to my throat
Say goodbye to your punching back
Goodbye to your scapegoat

I'm ending it now
I'm moving ahead
I slit my throat open
And I fall over dead
That was the best I could do right now.

2 July 2009, 08:28 PM   #4
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Maria, God, thats amazing, Good luck dear <3

2 July 2009, 08:29 PM   #5
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I liked that,

Good luck dear <3

2 July 2009, 09:16 PM   #6
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My poetry club

Join Please <3

4 July 2009, 10:31 PM   #7
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5 July 2009, 06:58 AM   #8
Joined: 18 Jun 2009
Posts: 4
He stand there cruel smile
I shiver in my place
He moves closer
I wish to cry out

More I sound the more I get hurt
He enjoys seeing me shrivel
I hate this pain
Why dose it last

I cannot leave
My family loves him
My hate hate for him
I want to be free fromhim

He grabs my neck throws me to the wall
I cry out in pain
Why can't this end 
Why can't i fend

My buises scars and other painful memorys
will never leave
no one will take a broken woman
I will never have another man

I want it to end
The pain and the suffering
Iwant him dead
I lift my knife

I stab him dead
I am free
I am at peace
They take me away

At least 
no one will suffer again
I am safe
I am loved by my self

I cannot be ashamed
He cannot get me now
He died
Now my life is a easy ride

5 July 2009, 12:27 PM   #9
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Thats alot of violence : )

5 July 2009, 02:50 PM   #10
Joined: 18 Jun 2009
Posts: 4
I have my own past of violence

6 July 2009, 07:17 AM   #11
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As do I.

6 July 2009, 04:37 PM   #12
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: (.  Awehh

6 July 2009, 08:40 PM   #13
Joined: 18 Jun 2009
Posts: 4
Yeah my dad used to hit me
Sad but true
I have scars on my hands from when he stabbed me
I was 4 I think
I still remeber it so well

6 July 2009, 10:34 PM   #14
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Oh god 

im so so so sorry

6 July 2009, 10:41 PM    #15
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i'm goin through,i'm a 14 yr old gurl who's bf hits her during skool when she's talkin 2
another boi that's in her class,who's always comin home from skool with bruises all over
her and has to make up lies 4 him everyday and she keeps breakin up with him and he 
leaves even more bruises on her and sometimes on her face. he tried 2 rape and kill me in
may. but now i'm glad it's all over with me and him

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