Idk what to name it.... this is just pics and info of people in the story :) This is
a Fantasy story :P
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Idk what to name it.... this is just pics and info of people in the story :) This is
a Fantasy story :P


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30 June 2011, 08:03 AM   #1
Joined: 20 Jul 2009
Posts: 38
Last edited by ‹~Carrie~(Im bi bitchis)›, 30 June 2011

Name;Miley Ann James
Nickname; Kitty 
Singer in her band (Made up name) Tears don't fall
age; 18
girl/boy;girl


Name;Maggie Anderson
nickname;Maggs
drummer in the band Tears don't Fall 
age19
girl/boy;girl


Name;Angle Jones
Nickname;AJ
bass player in the band Tears don't Fall
age20
girl/boy;boy


name;Alex knight 
nickname;knight 
bass player for Tears don't Fall
age19
boy/girl;boy


name;James Gomez 
nickname;JJ
Guitarist for Tears don't Fall 
age;21
girl/boy;boy


Name;Andy Biersack
Nickname;Andy Sixx
singer in his band black veil brides
Age 20
boy/girl;boy


Name;Ashley Purdy 
nickname; Ash 
bass player for band black veil brides 
age 20
boy/girl;boy


Name;Jake pitts 
nickname; jakey :P (Andy gave him that nickname) 
bass play for band black veil brides as well
age 21
boy/girl; boy


Name;Jinxx  
nick name; JJ
Guitarist for black veil brides 
age 20
boy/girl; boy


Name;Sandra 
nickname:sandy 
drummer 
age 19
boy/girl;girl
Hello my name is carrie and i love to wright storys so i have been trying to wright them on here so yeah i hope u love or at lesset like them

30 June 2011, 11:54 AM   #2
Joined: 20 Jul 2009
Posts: 38
CHAPTER ONE Miley's P.O.V 

"MILEY UP NOW"my step brother Angle called from behind my sticker filled door. "SHUT THE
FUCK UP AJ I'M UP!" I said throwing my pillow at the door so he would leave me alone;
after that my alarm when off."Fuck!' I yelled after getting scared from the sound. I
reached over to hit the off button when i feel to the floor bringing my Black veil brides
blanket down with me. 
I got up wobbling a little then i walked to my bathroom closing the door behind me as i
turned the shower on. As I finished I walked out to my room grabbing my iPhone that was
ringing. "Hello?" i asked as i answered it 

(convo)
Miley "Hello?"
Maggs "ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!" she screams 
Miley"?Maggs whats going on??"
Maggs"You will never guess who where.NO WE CANT TELL HER(<James's voice said out of no
where..JAMES STOP!"She said with a giggle.
(Phone hangs up)
I then looked at my phone shrugging then trowing it back on my bad.When i was done drying
off i went to my dresser and picked out 

Ok so im sorry im ending this right now but i will update it more late im super super
tired so yeah
Hello my name is carrie and i love to wright storys so i have been trying to wright them on here so yeah i hope u love or at lesset like them

30 June 2011, 12:27 PM    #3
Joined: 25 Feb 2010
Posts: 88
 Hmm... I strongly suspect you work on spelling and grammar. It's quite
distracting from the story when it's not great. Also, try to write actual dialogue. Here,
it's as if they were chatting online - try to avoid this unless they are doing so or you
are writing a script.


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