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I won the Heart of a Vampire with this voice 1st note sung


1 July 2009, 04:49 AM   #1
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I was writing a story I think its one of my best! Tell me what you think!(yes another
vamp story but NOT like twilight!)


I woke up screaming like every night. I could see that the moon was still high through the
thin fabric of my curtins. I got a sweater on and walked out the front door. I walked
around frowning. My foster parents would be up in a few hours. I sat down on a bench at
the park and started singing.Oh Oh Oh Sexy Vampire by Fright Ranger.
I forgot to wear my cross tonight
I left my garlic at home
Its so dumb but its so fun
to wonder round the city alone
Im running falling down
Chased me all around this town and now you've finaly got me
what am I to do?
Oh Oh Oh
Sexy Vampire Im falling in love
so just bite me baby and drink all my blood
Oh yeah
Sexy Vampire im falling in love with
so do what you want to do
Sexy vampire Im falling in love
So just bite me baby and drink all my blood
Oh yeah
Sexy vampire im falling in love with you
Cause you need my plasma more then I
Say you wonna stop for a drink or two?
And maybe for a disco brake here
We'll party all night till the sun comes up
You could say Im raising the stakes
Im running falling down
Chase me all around this town and now you've finaly got me
What am to do?
Oh Oh Oh
Sexy vampire im falling in love
So just bite me baby and drink all my blood
Oh yeah
Sexy vampire Im falling in love with you
so do what you want to do
Sexy vampire im falling in love
so just bite me baby and drink all my blood
Oh yeah
Sexy vampire Im falling in love with you
Cause you need my plasma more then I 
 
My Black hair wiped around me like a thin mist in the wind my blue eyes scanning the old
rotting park. I sighed. "It's not safe to wonder the city alone." I gasped and jumped
seeing a boy beside me. My heart was racing but not only of fear. He was beautiful. He had
blond hair with black streaks,pale white skin,and silver eyes that seemed to peer into my
soul. I looked away as memories of my mother's death creeped into my mind he looked alot
like the monster but only younger. "It may be dumb but its so fun." He smiled,"I guess
your right. But horrors live in our city." I snaped at him,"Of course they do! Monsters
hide in the shadows of this damned town! My mom should have moved from this hell hole but
no she had to be a fool and get herself killed!" He nodded,"My father was killed by one of
the monsters to. And then he got me." I looked at him strangly. His eyes turned red as he
touched my cheek. I suddenly felt dizzy. "You can rest Alex. Your safe from the monsters
tonight." He wishpered in my ear as I felt weak. "H-how do you k-k-know my name?" I was
leaning agianst him now. He went silent and I closed my eyes. I woke up in the morning
with the in print of the wood on my cheek. I looked around. Had it been a dream? No. I
found a note by my side. Here is what it read.
I had to leave Im sorry for my rudeness...Its just like me to leave such a helpless
girl all alone in this city. I hope you will join me for dinner tomorrow night. Come to
The Blood Vine' if you will give me a chance to say sorry in person.
Your protecter James
I felt my cheeks flush as I read the note. So his name was James?
 
James' point of view
I held the girl in my arms tightly. Father had sent me to kill her but when I had the
chance I wimped out. I was going soft! I losened my grip when I smelt Kimmy. The small
pale child came from her hiding spot. "Master will punish you. Why not rip her throat out
now she's a human why show her mersy?" I hissed at the small girl. "I showed you mersy did
I not? And besides Im going to kill her tomorrow father will understand."Kimmy looked
down. "Why spare her?" I nussled my nose into Alex's hair breathing in her sent. "I cant.
I am going to kill her. But not now..." Kim smiled she ran up to me offering her small
white hand. Gentle I pushed Alex off of me and griped the girl's hand. I looked behind me
and created a note that lay at her side. "Good-bye."


Please tell me what you think! (i suck at spelling so sorry   )
Devils Kid out  

26 July 2009, 04:49 PM   #2
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... Neat, pretty detailed! ^^

26 July 2009, 07:01 PM   #3
Joined: 19 Feb 2009
Posts: 17
This is really good.

30 July 2009, 05:50 PM    #4
Joined: 12 Oct 2008
Posts: 23
i like it but u need to change the song. :/
Bridget -Welcome to this Planet
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Emma Withers - Titanic 



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