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30 September 2010, 05:51 PM   #1
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So this is a new story, since I have writer's block for The Way the Cookie Crumbles.


Its just a short preview of it.

I spent a lot of time on the preview, because I wanted it to be perfect.

Comment and enjoy!

	Sixteen years ago, June Williams was born. Her mother couldn’t have been happier.
But then when June was two she disappeared. Her mother was devastated. Mr. and Mrs.
Williams stopped talking to each other; meanwhile the whole world was looking for a very
young girl. Then all of a sudden Mrs. Williams was found dead. Mr. Williams was one of the
first to know, and when he heard it he broke down. He couldn’t take hiding a secret
anymore. The very next day, he committed suicide. Yet, June was still alive and living.

30 September 2010, 07:52 PM   #2
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Oooh, a mystery!!
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9 May 2011, 01:50 AM   #3
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Posts: 669
I have really bad writer's block. Like where I can't even edit something. So I decided to
TRY to write more to this story, and I did. So far I think its pretty good. Not that I am
going to brag about it or anything, but this is probably the best I have written in about
two months. Also, note that the first part is just a preview and this is the start of it.


Comment and enjoy!

	“June wake up right now. We are landing,” said Miss Stephanie. I recognized her
voice even before I opened my eyes. I have known her for too long.
	I slowly opened my eyes, but I soon closed them again. The lights from the space ship
were very bright and they hurt my eyes a lot. Miss Stephanie came over to me, I could hear
her heels clicking against the metal, and smacked my arm.
	“June Williams, I said right now. If you are not up within the next five minutes you
will be killed. Let’s move it,” said Miss Stephanie. I groaned and she smacked my arm
	I opened my eyes and gave her a death glare; she just shook her head and walked away. The
door immediately opened before she got there and she walked out. Before she got five feet
away the door closed again. Right, I was supposed to get up. I slowly got off the bed and
my feet hit the cold mental. I quickly walked over to my drawer and pulled out some
	The clothes were just like any other person would be wearing. Well, maybe not. I pulled
on a red v-neck with sparkles all over the place. Then I pulled on leggings that also
sparkled. Then I quickly put on some tennis shoes that were just plain black. I quickly
brushed my black hair and pulled it up into a pony tail. I looked in the mirror and all I
saw was just me. My green eyes not shining and my black hair sticking up all over the
place. I never really cared at how I looked. Besides yesterday was a rough day.

9 May 2011, 02:15 AM   #4
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Posts: 88
 Wow, this is cool!

9 May 2011, 11:12 PM   #5
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i like it. it sounds pretty cool=)

11 May 2011, 12:19 AM   #6
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Posts: 669

Well, I wrote more to it. So far its still pretty good. Hopefully my writer's block is
gone, but whenever I say that it truly never is.

Comment and enjoy!

	Then all of a sudden I felt the ship land. Great we are here. I slowly walked out of
my room and into the main control room to see if Miss Stephanie was there. The main
control room was where most of the controls for the ship were. There is a few other
control rooms, but those are mostly back ups or to control a weapon thing. There were five
people in the room besides me, the main captain, Miss Stephanie, and other people who were
there to control the ship. I walked over past a bunch of things beeping to where Miss
Stephanie was. She was talking and flirting with the main captain. She would do that when
my life is at risk and she was supposed to protect me. Yeah, whatever.
	“Miss Stephanie the door is open for you and June,” said some dude sitting on a chair
eating a sandwich. Miss Stephanie looked over at him and nodded and then smiled. Ugh, does
she have to flirt with all of the guys? Then Miss Stephanie noticed me and she walked over
to me and grabbed my arm.
	She kept walking and she had a deathly grip on my arm until we reached the door. She let
go of my arm and I rubbed it. Did she really have to grab my arm that hard? Besides I was
still safe or at least I thought so.
	“We are on the planet, Stella,” said Miss Stephanie. I snorted.
	“What kind of name is that?” I asked. Miss Stephanie shook her head.
	“They named it after who founded it, June,” said Miss Stephanie.
	“Whatever. Why is this planet so special to me?” I asked.
	“Because I realized that you are useless and I always need to protect you. What if I am
not there one time and you die? Then our whole race would die with you, so I have decided
that since Stella was the closest planet with life that you need to learn how to protect
yourself,” said Miss Stephanie.
	“Is this because of what happened yesterday? Because you do realize that attack was not
your or my fault. It actually was a surprise attack, I mean the only way they would have
known-” I started, but got cut off.
	“Enough. I have already made my decision. We will stay here for three months. You will
train and I will find what I need to do with you,” said Miss Stephanie.
	“Fine, so let’s go then,” I said. Miss Stephanie nodded and walked down the twenty
steps to land. I followed her and while walking down the steps I looked around.

22 May 2011, 01:01 AM    #7
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Posts: 669
I typed some more. Not every much, though. I also don't know what I want to call this
book, so if you have any ideas please do share.

Comment and enjoy!

	The planet, Stella, was a beautiful place. I would be lying if I didn’t say that.
The first thing that I noticed is that even the air smelled better than any other planets
I have been to. In my sixteen years I have been to five. Most people don’t even leave
their home planet. The next thing that I noticed was how green it was. There were barely
any cars, some cars, but mostly bikes. The tall buildings, we were in one of the main
cities, were made of out of mental of course, but I swear to god that there was plants
coming out of the building! Plus, on top of the buildings there was a like a whole garden
full of plants. Right then I knew that I would never want to leave this planet.
	Yet, what struck me was at the bottom of the stairs there was a gendering group of
people. They were all yelling questions at me and holding microphones and in the back
there were people with cameras. I didn’t think that any news about me was that
important, but these people obviously wanted news about me.
	“June how does it feel that you almost died?”
	“June how does it feel to be traveling in that space ship for almost fourteen
	“June how does it feel to know that you will be living on a planet for four months?”
	“June do you feel safe or do you feel like they are going to find you again?”

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