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20 September 2010, 01:35 AM   #1
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Hi, Um im new here. Ill do just not a long thng first.
Ill have to think of things.
 Well, ill do my version of short.


The Day, Chapter one.
Story-

The drunk driver hit the side of the car, the car flung backwards. Cause a car to blow up
behinde us. That was the wrost day of my life. I had nothing to say about it untill now.
That drunk driver had killed my daughter. Yes, im 18 but I loved Alexia so very much. As I
sat outside the air felt good between my neck and my back. I had no idea who I was or what
I was. But all i knew was that my life, was over soon. I could see deaths as they happened
or after. That was the worst power i could ever want. But, it was mine for taking so i
took it. What a dumb day. I sawe the death while driving right before it happened. I cried
for more then days straight. I am still crying and that was four years ago.

21 September 2010, 12:45 AM   #2
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I get the gist of it, but try to make it more flowing. Connect the thoughts and start a
new paragraph if needed. Interesting so far; welcome to the club!
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21 September 2010, 12:46 AM   #3
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Thank you.

21 September 2010, 01:49 AM    #4
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I smiled to myself as I heard her voice over and over in my head ALexia. She was my baby.
She had never left my side untill she died. I was hunting the guy down but he had died a
few years ago. The same night my baby did. Of course I was glad. But i also felt sorry for
the poor guy. Everyone had made fun of me and now felt sorry.
(Thats all i can do. I ahve to go to bed...)



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