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19 September 2010, 09:35 PM   #1
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Hi, Um im new here. Ill do just not a long thng first.
Ill have to think of things.
 Well, ill do my version of short.

The Day, Chapter one.

The drunk driver hit the side of the car, the car flung backwards. Cause a car to blow up
behinde us. That was the wrost day of my life. I had nothing to say about it untill now.
That drunk driver had killed my daughter. Yes, im 18 but I loved Alexia so very much. As I
sat outside the air felt good between my neck and my back. I had no idea who I was or what
I was. But all i knew was that my life, was over soon. I could see deaths as they happened
or after. That was the worst power i could ever want. But, it was mine for taking so i
took it. What a dumb day. I sawe the death while driving right before it happened. I cried
for more then days straight. I am still crying and that was four years ago.

20 September 2010, 08:45 PM   #2
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I get the gist of it, but try to make it more flowing. Connect the thoughts and start a
new paragraph if needed. Interesting so far; welcome to the club!
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20 September 2010, 08:46 PM   #3
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Thank you.

20 September 2010, 09:49 PM    #4
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I smiled to myself as I heard her voice over and over in my head ALexia. She was my baby.
She had never left my side untill she died. I was hunting the guy down but he had died a
few years ago. The same night my baby did. Of course I was glad. But i also felt sorry for
the poor guy. Everyone had made fun of me and now felt sorry.
(Thats all i can do. I ahve to go to bed...)

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