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Blood Spill-The actual thing.

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21 March 2010, 07:07 PM   #1
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(continued from the preview.)

I know absolutely know one, when I do, I kill them. Though I harm people, I don't harm
animals. They are the only things not scares of me and understand me. So, when I come
across a stray or a random animal, they stroll over and sit with me. Id makes me feel
loved. That's my fuel to survive and not end it now. Well that and the fact I love to kill
people. I'm heading to Mississippi to mess with some people there, I'm getting to well
known here.
"E-excuse me miss...?" a voice came from below. There was a tug on my pant leg and I
looked down at a little blubbering kid.
"What do you want, kid?" I asked suddenly irritated.
"Do you know where my mommy is? Do you know her?" He looked at me with his misty, big,
brown eyes. He took my hand and led me to a big stand. He went right past it and into a
dark alley with an old hobo who got scared and ran away. I raised an eyebrow. A strange
feeling jerked in my stomach. I stretched my arm out and strangled him. His head rotated
around to face me. This time I raised both eyebrows. 
"Okay, someone watches too much t.v...."
"So, you noticed I was hungry."
"Go eat someone you can actually look in the eye, pip sqeuak. Oh wait, you won't live
anymore." I felt my eyes change from purple to red.

25 March 2010, 03:20 AM   #2
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Nice I would love it if you continued this.There, were a few spelling errors, but other
than that I think the story was okay.^^

27 March 2010, 10:47 PM   #3
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wait who was it she strangled the kid or the creepy dude??

28 March 2010, 12:48 AM   #4
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The kid.

7 April 2010, 04:32 PM   #5
Joined: 3 Mar 2010
Posts: 2
i liked the preview a lot. but this part was a little confusing.... keep writing, it
seems like it can get really good. (this was not meant to be offensive. just constructive
I luv 2 write!

8 April 2010, 07:41 PM    #6
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Thank you!
I'm trying to type more, but I'm all caught up in requests for people and it takes awhile.

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