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WRITING:Poetry:Taste The Rainbow

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4 December 2009, 08:11 PM   #1
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A hint of yellow,
a dash of blue.
Make the sky,
perfect for you.

A trickle of green,
a sprinkle of white,
make a pretty sunshine light.

Add some black,
a bit of grey,
that's what you've done to my day.

But then the black,
mixed with silver,
gives the moon reflection,
a magical shimmer.

Liven it up,
with purple and pink,
no more crying,
near the bathroom sink.

Party at night,
multi-cloured light,
never again will we have to fight

I've tasted the rainbow,
I've lived the colours,
now it's your turn to go,
make your life a little less duller. 

Hope you like it  

4 December 2009, 10:20 PM   #2
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
i liked it, it was charming
a little funny
and slightly disarming
a little sunny

7 December 2009, 01:00 AM    #3
Joined: 18 Sep 2009
Posts: 6
I find it amazing how you took something as simple as a rainbow and made it your own and
connected your life experiances to it. very good

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