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WRITING: Original Song Lyrics: Can you see me?

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21 August 2009, 02:32 PM   #1
Joined: 21 Aug 2009
Posts: 1
Last edited by Tini_Jess, 23 August 2009
It's not the greatest =/ But i tried Uhmmm... 
well leave  comment leaving your honest opinon=] 
Idc if you say it sucks I'm fine with that ... 
Just tell me what I can change/ Or do better =]
Thank you,


Can you see me?
Do you know me? 
Can you ever give a sign?

I am empty
Can you listen?
Or just take a look inside.

Cause I'm there 
When your there
Come on see me
just stare.

Cause I feel alone 
In this world.
Come on take me
Lets get away from her.

Cause she not good for you.
I'm good for you 

And then I'll fall into your arms 
and we'll run
and you'll take me away.

Cause do you know what its like -
to be left in the dark.
Do dream of some light-
where your his shining star.

To be taken' away 
On this fairtail ride..
I'll let you decide.


21 August 2009, 03:11 PM    #2
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
do you have a title for it? and also please note the Club's Naming policies,it helps to
sort out and to find stuff we want, if we titled them all just the titles it would be too

please rename your post like this:

WRITING: Original Lyrics: "name of your song"

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