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FFFFF seigi [butler version??? xD ]


19 July 2009, 08:29 AM   #1
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well i found a picture from ... i think it was a year ago xD
[i've been finding alot of old seigi drawings mnmnmhhnh :D ]
and i thought i might aswell post it up
for criticisms. xDDD



uh.... just like Erika's Derrick
Seigi is my male counterpart :D [LOL i've had him
for 3 years already and i still love'em xD]
describing him: he gets attracted to hats :D
he likes hats. alot. Me and him are not that different :|
except he's a guy XDDD he loves being a seme :DD
but hates it when he's an uke :D [erika should understand that but... xD ]
he's one badass uke [lol i said bad ass xD i dont say that xDD] 
he's the happy type of person... yeah. enough of that happy crap xD

about the drawing, i cant explain it but i know something is DEFINITELY WRONG.
it looks stupid xD gosh i really hate mah art, this should burn
like all of my other old scribbles  WHOO. XDD

19 July 2009, 01:24 PM   #2
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Oh wow, this is very well done.
My only issue is the hat. It's sitting too far up on his head.

19 July 2009, 01:39 PM   #3
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It's suposed to look like it's gonna fall off =_=" *epic fail *

19 July 2009, 01:49 PM   #4
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Hm, I see.
Well it kind of dosen't look right.
But it's still a very, very good picture.

20 July 2009, 12:10 AM   #5
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Dude, I want a gender bender character of me :O

Man, I know you want critiques, but to be honest there's nothing really 
wrong with. hahah
I guess maybe the arm looks a little stiff and the white cloth stuff
looks really randomly placed.
But yeah, I really like this. It's super cute~ :3

20 July 2009, 12:27 AM   #6
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 391
Omfg this is win. c:

He reminds me of Sebastian from Kuroshitsuji. x]
The only thing that bothers me is the cloth.
Other than that, I think it's flawless.
Art is love. ♥

20 July 2009, 12:28 AM   #7
Joined: 11 Jul 2009
Posts: 17
LMMFAO. OHGAWD. THIS IS EPIC YO.
Reminds me of a mixture of the Undertaker and Sebastian. ♥
Too bad. He gets to be Uke anyways. Deal with it. xD
Love the Gothic-like look!~
Teach me?
Couriousity Killed The Cat. But Since When Were We Cats? Ohyeah. I came up with that. ♥

20 July 2009, 12:31 AM   #8
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 391
LOL UNDERTAKER WHERE? 8D
/fart.
Art is love. ♥

20 July 2009, 12:32 AM   #9
Joined: 11 Jul 2009
Posts: 17
...--facepalm--
I SAID HE REMINDS ME OF A MIXTURE OF THE UNDERTAKER AND SEBASTIAN.
Anyways, I own Seigi so HAH. >D
Btw, Sakura, you need to send me his VOICE. ♥
Couriousity Killed The Cat. But Since When Were We Cats? Ohyeah. I came up with that. ♥

20 July 2009, 07:23 AM   #10
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Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 124
His book is deformed, looks like it's kind of... fat and bent. The sleeve is too long for
his arm or his arm is too long for his body, considering how he looks somewhat like a
chibi. The bandage doesn't seem to make sense when it wraps around him, the last time it
wraps around his arm it's rather clung to it, so I thought maybe it was wrapped around
something else, but it doesn't really show. 

I like how you colored the hair and how soft you made it. Very nice. Great job. ^^

20 July 2009, 07:38 AM   #11
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This is so amazing, and soft.♥
The hair is complete awesomeness.
Everything seems to have been pointed out. I suppose the sleeves too long.The book seems
too wide on the top, but other than that, fantastic.

20 July 2009, 10:57 AM   #12
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
Whoa, he's hot. XD
The only thing that's a bit weird is the hat. It seems like it's falling off. But other
than that, I love it :D
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK

20 July 2009, 12:16 PM   #13
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Last edited by CLnekoo, 26 July 2009
@karolinacake: i appreciate the compliments aswell as the critiques XDDD
you can make an oppposite gender of yourself if you want xDD
@‹OjamajoPower♥› : thanks for the critique xD though i hope you'd give a more
detailed description <:|
@‹♥Don't♥Say♥Crazy♥›: he'll wring you if you keep making him an uke xD
@Kyun_yo: no offense to the others but apparently you're the only one who gave a decent
critique xDDD
thank you LOL. you have the same observations as me O_o LOL. i guess thats what happens
after a year. xDD
@Yanely_a_la_mode: i dont find it amazing... i find it kinda weird and stupid xD but
thanks anyway for the time xDD
@lollylovex3: well it's supposed to look like it's gonna fall off xD *epic fail = orz*

wow thanks for the many replies guys :D

the stuff you guys should know about: 
1. well the bondage is supposed to show that he can get into so much trouble because of
his curiosity..
2. whats wrong with his clothes though? please be more specific <:| but i know that
somethings wrong xDD
3.the long sleeves xD well it supposed to make it seem like its too big for him but..
*fails again*

YES I FAILED AT MAKING ALL THAT STUFF LOOK WHAT IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE.

anyways. thnx guys xD

20 July 2009, 12:22 PM    #14
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
Loool, I see. I feel bad for criticing such an awesome artist like you. So yeh... :P
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK


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