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12 July 2010, 09:17 PM   #1
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Joined: 23 Jun 2010
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So. I drew this oekaki:

(It looks terrible, I know that already.) Then, later in my life, I drew it again and made
it better:

(Still just OK.) And now, I have drawn a third. And It's my new style, so tell me what you
think: (But only about this last one.)
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13 July 2010, 02:44 AM   #2
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For 03. 
The ear is way too up.
The hair is a bit messy.
Nose is placed at the wrong place.
Work on boobs a bit more. ^^
Arms are too big.

And that's all the glitches I could find.

13 July 2010, 03:27 PM   #3
Joined: 28 Jun 2010
Posts: 31
You've definitely improved and there really isn't any criticism I can say because Twinkly
has mentioned everything in detail :]
But well done for how far you've got (:

13 July 2010, 05:10 PM    #4
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Last edited by ‹RushingStars★›, 13 July 2010
Hmm, didn't notice any of that stuff except the 1st and 4th one. But thanks.
And also thank you, Emily. I really like the newest drawing, it's the best oekaki I've
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