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17 July 2009, 07:01 PM   #1
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Last edited by Dream_Dream_Dream, 17 July 2009

I did this a a couple of weeks ago.
I really like it, and so did the girl I did it for.
The way I did this, was by using the Pen Tool (I colored it by using the Pen Tool also.).
It took me about an hour1/2 to finish.

17 July 2009, 07:15 PM   #2
Joined: 12 Jul 2009
Posts: 22
It's quite good.  I'm  not the best a drawing people, so I can really only critique it
technically.  :P
The main thing that I'd suggest for the next time you draw, would be to refine the lines a
bit more, just so it's not so scribbly.  And there's something about the winking eyes half
of the face that just doesn't feel persepectivly right... could just be me though.  ^^
Otherwise, I think you did a nice job in choosing the colours. 

17 July 2009, 07:30 PM   #3
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Ah thanks you. ^^

But thanks again.
I will deffintly try to make it less scribbly. 


17 July 2009, 08:39 PM   #4
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Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 124
Wow... it's really awesome. :D I love the background the color scheme for it. His sparkly
hair... is brilliant. :D It looks really pretty. xD

And... now...

Sorry, I didn't feel like I could effectively point out what's wrong if I wrote in words.
Although I like how sparkly and nice the hair. It should be a bit more shading to it...
like how the t-shirt is shaded the hair should be shaded as well. :D If it is shaded, it
should be in noticeable streaks... ^^ 

The arm seems a bit weird, so I drew two sets of imaginary arms to set a better place on
where it's positioned. And then I took blue and traced back to the origins in which is
shows that his body is squishing the arm. I even tried the pose itself and it seems a bit
awkward. I think the arm can maintain it's original position if you somehow make it seem
like the arm is bent. I don't know how to do that. xP

The forehead is a bit too wide, I guess you're trying to make his head parallel to the
floor but the facial features don't quite match so the bulge as it extends outwards kind
of is awkward... 

I really love the pose but it's a bit skinny. So...^^; I'll let the picture explain it. 

I'm sorry for drawing all over it. D: You did a really great job! (The stars are really
awesome. ._. I can't draw stars to save my life...)

17 July 2009, 09:08 PM   #5
Joined: 17 Jul 2009
Posts: 14
Your very good at drawing that's for sure!
But, the ear is a tad small, and the eyes doesn't have to be so long. :]
The pose is very nice though, it's very creative, and I love the hair!

17 July 2009, 09:43 PM   #6
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Haha thanks you two.
WOW these are really helpful.
I'm glad I joined this club~!

@ Kyun: Your very descriptive, that helps me alot and I LOVE how you redrew the picture
(That helps me the most ^^).

@ Mesi: Thanks Mesi-chan, you also helped me by pointing out things that kyun-chan didn't.


17 July 2009, 09:59 PM   #7
Joined: 14 Jul 2009
Posts: 39
Everyone already said the critics and Kyun_yo even pointed it out @_x... I really like your style! It's sketchyness makes it look awsome! I think the mouth might be a tad bit big, and the ear should be more round instead of square/rectangle.Other then that I love everything else about it! Btw, Did you know the person you made it for is in the club? She's my friend in Real Life x']

17 July 2009, 10:04 PM   #8
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*O* SHE IS?!
Is she as awesome in real life as she is on Kupika? xD

17 July 2009, 10:10 PM   #9
Joined: 14 Jul 2009
Posts: 39
Lol yeah x'D she's very hyper in RL!

‹○♥Shineba♥Iinoni♥○›  ◄-that's her!

17 July 2009, 11:33 PM    #10
Joined: 11 Jul 2009
Posts: 17
Lupita's right. We go to school together and chased me down the hall because I stole her
scissors and was running in the halls with it. 8D And our lockers were ALMOST beside
eachother but Avery had to be inbetween. D:>
Lulu, it's called Apple Juice. C: It's my crack.

And yeah, Kyun gots it all. God, she goes all the way. c:
Len is still a smexy mofo. 
Couriousity Killed The Cat. But Since When Were We Cats? Ohyeah. I came up with that. ♥

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