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18 July 2009, 01:06 AM   #1
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
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Last edited by Mesi, 18 July 2009
I probably should have made a lineart instead. D:
I still like it though.


I hate myself for the crookedness. D:

18 July 2009, 01:47 AM   #2
Joined: 15 Jul 2009
Posts: 39
Hmm...I looked around and I don't see much wrong except that it looks a bit.... crooked... Anyway you nicely shaded the shirt right,and the anatomy is fine. I'm not really sure about this, but I think the hand should be a little bit bigger. I'm probably wrong about that @_x. The is nicely done though! I can't really see the face good since there's outlines O.e....Maybe you should clean up the lines next time :] (Wow I suck at critic x'] )

18 July 2009, 01:48 AM   #3
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
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The head is tilted and makes it seem uncomfortable, and the arm might be a little bit too
But your coloring is wonderful, and I love the scarf!

;-; I have to ask, did you use two tones on the skin, because it looks like you did.

I bet you don't know what I'm lololing about.

18 July 2009, 01:51 AM   #4
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 14
No, you crit just fine! ;-; 
I know, I really should have, no excuse there. 
Thank you for the critque!

I did use two tones, and I thought it turned out great! <3
Thank you for the critque!

18 July 2009, 01:53 AM   #5
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The colors are BEAUTIFUL and the pose is great.
I do see where you got lazy though, no feet and you didn't erase the sketch lines. xD
BUT THATS OKAY. *Two thumbs up*

18 July 2009, 01:53 AM   #6
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
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I think it looks fantastic! I usually have to use like, 4 to get that out come. D:

I bet you don't know what I'm lololing about.

18 July 2009, 01:56 AM   #7
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 14
xD Yeah, I should fix that, huh?
I'm glad you like it though! ;-;

18 July 2009, 11:59 AM   #8
Joined: 12 Jul 2009
Posts: 8
As well as rubbing off the guidelines and the words, you could use another layer (if
possible) to go over the line work to make it look a lot cleaner.
Anatomy wise, I think the arm pointing outwards is a bit too long.

18 July 2009, 01:05 PM   #9
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Last edited by ‹Syndromic_Wonderland›, 18 July 2009
I feel that the hand could be bigger and the arm shorter. That's the only thing that
seems to bother me, and I can't find any others...

This picture is really cute. I like the expression on her face, and the ears are very
good. The shading is also good. 

Do you use layers? Layers are when you can put different things on it. One one layer could
be the lineart, the other color, or etc. It would make things a whole lot easier and you
can edit or erase things on it easily.

18 July 2009, 01:09 PM    #10
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
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Syndromic, yeah I do use layers, but I was talking about how can I put this on another
program but still use the layers. D: I've searched on google, but key-wrods aren't my

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