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WRITING: Poetry: Him&you


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11 June 2009, 08:28 PM   #1
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Love personified is Him.
Love materialized is you.
Forgiveness across every ocean is Him.
Forgiveness of my everyday sin is you.
Kisses from Him are of the wind, caressing my face, kissing my forehead
As a Father should.
Kisses from you are slips of lips,(oh goodness!) the chills
But so ridden with guilt. 
So loved, so love? 
Can you find yourself here?
Po-e-try makes me happyyyy.

11 June 2009, 09:02 PM   #2
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very spiritual, ilike the ambiguity, is Him Christ or just some personal saviour? could
be both or either.

13 June 2009, 04:03 AM   #3
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Him is Christ.  But thanks!
Po-e-try makes me happyyyy.

14 June 2009, 02:51 AM   #4
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Last edited by ‹Syndromic_Wonderland›, 14 June 2009
Beautiful. I love it!

14 June 2009, 11:26 PM   #5
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Thanks!  
Po-e-try makes me happyyyy.

15 June 2009, 02:32 AM   #6
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O.o that was really pretty

15 June 2009, 08:11 PM   #7
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Thank you. ^_^
Po-e-try makes me happyyyy.

25 June 2009, 04:56 AM   #8
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Awesome love it!

28 June 2009, 05:26 AM    #9
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Thanks! :D
Po-e-try makes me happyyyy.



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