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WRITING:Poetry:A Child Paints

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26 November 2009, 07:59 PM   #1
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Joined: 15 Jul 2009
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Just wrote this one^^

Thick swirls of color
appear on the paper
as the child giggles in delight.
The paintbrush glides
across clean white pages.
Water slops into the paint set
the paint mixes
but she doesn't care.
Even though blue has mixed with yellow
and pink has mixed with green
she is still overjoyed.
Its not the colors that matter;
it is the act itself.

27 November 2009, 08:42 AM   #2
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
it is lovely. cant help but picture it in my mind.

29 November 2009, 03:23 PM   #3
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I agree with Eddie, it really gives you a good mental picture. Sweet

1 December 2009, 07:10 PM   #4
Joined: 3 Oct 2009
Posts: 11
you're really good

love isn't really immortal, right?

2 December 2009, 12:28 AM    #5
Joined: 18 Sep 2009
Posts: 6
i liked it it shows the sence of childhood inasence, and how it's like to be a kid all
over again. it was great

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