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WRITING: Poetry: Seeing Through Tears

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7 August 2009, 01:33 AM   #1
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Last edited by Manderlinaa, 7 August 2009
She used to dream,
Dreams so sweet.
When she fell asleep.

She never was the beauty queen,
Popular girl at the scene,
But at least she wasn't an outsider.

She used to be pretty,

Now she's ugly,


Hating herself.
Eyes searching the mirror for what used to be.
Wanting to be.
Everything she used to be.

She eats right,
Stopped what else she was doing.

She wants to stoop to extremes.
Eating less,
Starving herself.

What to do?
Is there hope for this thirteen-year old used to be?
Why is she doing?

For boys?
A better life?
Her friends?
To fit?
To look god?

No reasons.

She prays.
No answers.
She cries.
Huge tears.
She laughs,
Crying inside.

She gave up her favorite food,
She gave up chocolate,
She gave up everything.

She gives it all she got,
Running till she's sweating,
Dancing till she's not.
Not eating that much.
She's on the verge of collapse.
Of dying inside.

But no one notices.

Her dad,
Bad remarks,
Endless lies,
More cries.

Her mom,
Bad arguments,
Endless fussing,
Endless cussing.

Laughter on the outside,
Hurting on the insides.

Only one person notices.
She's been there for years.
Only one person sees her,
Through her tears.

7 August 2009, 07:18 AM   #2
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I think you should know;;
deep within my thoughts;;
there's you;;
I don't even know it;;
until that one day;;
when it rolled upon me;;
seeing you throught these liquids;;
I didn't know it was true;;
but it was and i hope not to ever feel this way again;;
And I know when to make this feeling stop;;
likeI've said;;
it hurt to see through these tears;;


7 August 2009, 07:07 PM   #3
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7 August 2009, 11:28 PM   #4
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8 August 2009, 01:37 AM    #5
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Posts: 32
Aww that was pretty . There were some parts that didn't flow quite right with me , but other than that , good job (:
oh so insane . ♥

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