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Persuasive Challenge ~FINISHED!~


10 July 2008, 03:10 PM   #1
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Last edited by ashleeredger1, 15 September 2008
This is a surprise challenge! If you can write a persuasive paragraph by Tuesday, then
you will get a heart! ( check the new Hearts topic )
It can be about anything you want! If you need inspiration or ideas you can check out my
kupipage about Global Warming.

If you need a topic to get started here are some that are at the top of my head ( you
don't have to use these! ):

Animal Abuse
De-forestation (sp?)
Dog Fighting
Presidential Vote

11 July 2008, 05:41 AM   #2
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Joined: 10 Jul 2008
Posts: 11
Can I try? I want to do Against Animal Abuse!

Entry:

I firmly believe that animal abuse of any kind is wrong.  Animals are living
creatures and should be treated with the respect we should show other humans.  Domestic
(cats, dogs, bunnies, etc.) animals, no matter what has been done to them, just want to be
loved! If you take in a dog that has been abused, it will most likely be all the more
caring and sweet because it will think it did something wrong before. They want you to
like them, they really do! Most animal attacks are done because they have been pushed to a
limit from being mistreated and neglected. They have breaking points just like us! They
are only trying to defend themselves. Imagine if a young child accidently wet the floor.
Would you beat it as you would a dog that went inside? They (animals) have to be taught
the same way as a child does: by giving them a reward when good and a slight reprimand
when bad. There is really no difference between a person and an animal  that you have
pledged to take care of. Wild animals that are taken as pets away from their natural
habitat shouldn't be used as circus animals. Maybe having one of that species in a zoo is
alright if they are properly taken care of and used to help people learn about them.
Educate people about how to treat animals, wild or domestic, and the world could be a much
better place for humans and animals. We really aren't that different. It is of my
strong opinion that animal abuse, no matter for what reason or cause, is  wrong and should
be stopped.


Is that okay? I hope it isn't too long!
(:Panda

11 July 2008, 11:36 PM   #3
Casey
Joined: 15 Jun 2008
Posts: 231
oh god. im gonna have to pass on this challenge cause i suck at persuasive paragraphs. i
got a terriable grade at school for this

12 July 2008, 03:55 PM   #4
Guest Poster
That's Ok. You don't have to do all of the paragraphs.  

13 July 2008, 03:26 AM   #5
Casey
Joined: 15 Jun 2008
Posts: 231
good this is what mine would be.

Don't eat broccile. Eat candycorn. Do it or I'll kill you!

16 July 2008, 11:08 PM   #6
Lily
Joined: 29 Jun 2008
Posts: 6
well really im onley ten so im not good at persuasive paragraphs!!

16 July 2008, 11:23 PM   #7
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okay... I'll try.......

We shouldn't get to look at a Celebrities personal life! They have there right to privacy
too! Watching somebody else's life shouldn't be used for entertainment! They are like
everyday people except with more problems because people follow them everywhere. What
happened to privacy? We all have some they should too! If they have a baby it's big news!
sure if they're young then it's a bad idea but just tell your kids that it's bad to have a
baby that young and get over it! The person's ability to sing or act has nothing to do
with getting married or going to Rehab. If you want to see that kind of stuff look around.
It happens to everyone. The only real difference between the stars and us are fame and
money. 



how's that? I really don't know.

16 July 2008, 11:40 PM   #8
Guest Poster
It's okay but you should write about something more...meaningful. I mean do you
really want to change that and have a way to? But you will still get a heart.

17 July 2008, 12:45 AM   #9
Guest Poster
Well I do want to change that. I mean would you want people documenting everything bad
that happens to you just because you were on a television show? Think of those people for
a bit. I haven't figured out a way to get people to stop but I'll find someway.

10 September 2008, 03:06 PM   #10
Guest Poster
Right. So now whatever my teacher's been jamming into my head since I was ten will some
into use. :]

Racial Discrimination

Racial discrimination, or racism, is and has been a growing problem for the past few
centuries. From the Holocaust to black segregation in many Western countries, we face
situations of racism all around us. Sometimes, we even find ourselves victims of it.
Racism is very serious, not only because of its immorality but also because of its forms:
It could be anything as simple as kids forming 'race cliques' with only people of their
own race and leaving out the other races by purpose, or even as serious as Hitler's
persecution of the Jewish race during the Holocaust. Not only do victims of racism find
themselves mentally discouraged and hurt, physical blows may even be afflicted upon them.
Racism is not only morally wrong, it is an act that is beyond forgiving. Generally, racism
is carried out against a minority race or a race that is seen as 'inferior' to others.
Cite the Negro race for example. Even in films and movies, blacks have been cast as
foolish, scheming and untrustworty personalities. They are also seen as 'poor' by most,
who forget that most poor people in Western countries are actually the Westerners
themselves. That is just one example, and I will continue to elaborate in what I am going
to tell you next.

Sorry! I am sleepy. 

Sigh, my teacher would definitely fail me.

15 September 2008, 01:45 AM   #11
Guest Poster
! think it was awsome! But you didn't include any persuasive things in it. Instead it was
an essay. But other than that it was so great!

9 October 2008, 04:36 AM    #12
Casey
Joined: 15 Jun 2008
Posts: 231
Last edited by ‹Casey_Be_A_Vampire›, 9 October 2008
or maybe something like this


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