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9 August 2009, 10:28 AM   #1
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Last edited by CLnekoo, 10 August 2009
 i had a very random day ._. 
o_e today was SO FREAKING WEIRD.
here's a doodle thingy that i made when i was waiting for 
*cough loud voice* HIKARI-CHAN. *cough loud voice *
 i hope she's not reading this =w= 

w/e just criticize it =_="
it doesnt look good in my book anyways WOO.
*waits for crits*

anyways. i noticed this suits the vocaloid song "romeo and cinderella" .
so liek. here. i like this version xD

^-^ have a nice day folks :D

OI. just a note:
I'm using a CRT monitor.
So if you're using an LCD monitor,
Please adjust the brightness X//////X

thanks for the crits!

9 August 2009, 01:10 PM   #2
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
Holy shit. *dies* 

I love the candies and especially how the eyes stand out. But, I found the pink pillow on
the left hand side a bit awkward on the dood's blanket.
But still gwarsh, that's like... smexy.
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Are painted over in black

9 August 2009, 05:31 PM   #3
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Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 124
-can't see- 
-therefore can't really crit-

x.x; I know it is your style but...the colors...either that or you should make the lineart
stand out...xP -cant see- 

all I see is his eyes and they're really nice. :D You did a great job.

9 August 2009, 06:37 PM   #4
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
I have to say, if everyone in the state you live in drew as well as you the same way you
do, every other state would go out of business.

the only thing that i can find is that those circles above her look... out of place to me,
but i think that's just me. and... er.... well that's all i'm going to say 
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

9 August 2009, 06:51 PM   #5
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Your lineart is really soft, but it was hard for me to see, too. I love the eyes, and how
the body is contorted like that. Makes it feel sexy and soft. >:D

9 August 2009, 06:53 PM   #6
Joined: 31 Jul 2009
Posts: 46
Uhm.. Well..

It looks fantastic, but when I tried to get into that position it hurt. I don't think
that's possible. O.o

But it does look really good! You're colouring is very nice, and the setting is very
pretty. The only thing that really bothers me is the pose. :P

9 August 2009, 09:22 PM   #7
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wow i suck at making stuff blend in xDDDDDDDDDDDDDd
@everybodeh: thanks for the crit :D you all found something the others
didnt xD btw, the monitor, just adjust the brightness if you're using an LCD
@katie: i tried that pose, didn't hurt me O_o

9 August 2009, 09:31 PM   #8
Joined: 31 Jul 2009
Posts: 46
Then you are bendy. ._.

9 August 2009, 10:06 PM   #9
Joined: 8 Aug 2009
Posts: 2
I really cant find anything wrong with it.
The picture up front is amazing.
If she is in a room i think you need to bring a litte more shading in the backround to
make it look like a room
But if its just a backround to complement the the bed and the person, then the colors need
to look a little bit more
dreamy like the really hot person XDDD.

But i love it  8D

10 August 2009, 04:20 AM   #10
Joined: 20 Jul 2009
Posts: 128
Yaoi much?
lol JK its rly cute! I thought it was L at first cause of the hair x).

Its so fluffy looking but the skin looks kinda dirty to me D= IDK proubly its just my
screen lol.

BTW KAWAII song! ^_^

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11 August 2009, 05:16 PM    #11
Joined: 2 Aug 2009
Posts: 44
Looks good! =] The top half is perfectly fine, but the bottom half seems far from the
torso.  I can't really tell whats going on with the legs...I think you're trying to get
him to sorta bend it but not and it's stretched out towards the viewer?

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