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My book ((No title right now...please help me with that!))


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8 September 2008, 08:46 PM   #1
Joined: 9 Jun 2008
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“Hey, I am home!” yelled Nikki.
	“Hey, I am in the kitchen! I have some great news to tell you!” yelled her Nikki’s
mom. Nikki has never moved before until last year when her and her mom got a divorce.
Nikki’s sister, Ally, decided to stay with her dad. While Nikki and her mom moved just
down the street. 	
	Nikki walked in the kitchen and said, “So…what’s the right news?”
	“You know I said I will never ever be dating anymore? Well…I decide to!”
	“Oh, okay. When is dinner going to be ready?”
	“In 30 minutes, but are you happy that I am dating?”
	“Yeah, sure,” said Nikki while walking upstairs to her room. 

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That's all I have right now but I will do the rest in a little while.

12 September 2008, 09:43 PM    #2
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Last edited by ‹TrulYandForeveR<3›, 12 September 2008
yelled her Nikki’s mom
get rid of the her
 “So…what’s the right news?”
change right to great

i have no idea what it's about yet. but it sounds a little interesting. i want to read
more soon. take my corrections into consideration. i am really good with grammer and such.


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