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28 July 2009, 07:03 PM   #1
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110

yeah, this is my first time attempting a person on the computer >>'
there is something wrong with the face, i think, and the hair is just dead. suggestions
welcome on those two especially ^^'
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

29 July 2009, 07:39 AM   #2
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WOOH first comment LOL
[i normally dont care if im first xD ]
i like the background idea :D
and the concept is good 

criticisms time
-the way you shaded the hair and sking are too different
[just try to even it out  ]
-the moon isnt... er .. curvy enough ^^;
-there are alot of spots that need to be more realistic
here... [no offense ^^; but this is criticism.. ] like evening
out the parts of the body.

practice practice practice! xDD

29 July 2009, 12:42 PM   #3
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
ok, thanks! hair vz. skin... curvy moons... even out body!

thanks, i'll work on that when i notice it in the future (FF---> 30 minutes from now when
i make two people and a cat)
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

30 July 2009, 02:09 PM   #4
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Yup. The background is cool. The moon is too dark. Make some shiny.
The body ratio is not that well. AKA Head looks too big compared to body and the legs are
supposed to be lower. Hair needs some work. Needs to be a bit more clean because I can see
the excess lines at the black spot.

31 July 2009, 11:58 AM   #5
Joined: 30 Jul 2009
Posts: 22
It's good :] Be sure to practice! :D

-Crits- You should lighten up the moon a bit
-Make the right arm a bit shorter
-Use more colors to blend the hair and the skin and hair have diffrent shading
-The head is a tad big

1 August 2009, 04:50 AM   #6
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
:/ more then a tad. i think i did this blindfolded. or blinfollded.

thanks about the arm especially, i couldn't tell if it was one arm or the other that was
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

1 August 2009, 06:53 PM   #7
Joined: 31 Jul 2009
Posts: 15
the character design seems very interesting to me XD <3
you can always try to give the hair some volume~ you can do this either by lineart or
through simple use of colour!

here's an example: http://kupika.com/pics.php?id=q4a74c70bdb2d5o83w9i

the background has a really mesmerizing appearance even though it appears out of focus in
comparison with the character~
like others have said, make the moon more focused maybe? : D!
Good job! <3

1 August 2009, 07:05 PM    #8
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
ok thanks (   :|   ---->     )

yeah, i softened the background, some of it, then put a few symbolic circles over it and
didn't soften them as much.
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

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