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Writing:Poetry:Jacobs Poem

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17 July 2009, 12:55 PM   #1
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This ones kind of cheesy..I wrote it for my crush..
Jacob,I love you,although you can't tell,
Jacob,I'll wait for you forever.
Jacob,it doesn't matter what people think,
because I'll always be with you.
So Jacob,my Jacob,
wait for me,
because with you I want to forever be.

17 July 2009, 05:07 PM   #2
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
its cute, an early poem clearly, but sweet in its intent.

what happened to Jacob?

you should right a second one now that reflects on what happened or how your feelings

17 July 2009, 05:23 PM    #3
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nothing happened,i still like him,but,hes my best friend and doesn't know.

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