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Writing:Poem:Something So Simple

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25 June 2009, 11:01 PM   #1
Joined: 23 Jun 2009
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A point of a pencil.
A stroke of a brush.
Just feels all too simple.
Unlike love.

The hand that caresses me
Above and below.
The tounge that licks me.
So sweet and mellow.

The lips that whisper.
To my surprise.
Something uncomfortably sweet
To tear up my eyes.

An artist who's worked from day in and day out.
On a piece undeserved.
Knows the love shared by two.
Something simple,
yet all so new.

Something simple 
Something sweet.
When the Lovers eyes meet.
You know right then 
That something so simple
so new

25 June 2009, 11:06 PM   #2
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
its lovely.....and has a nice flow to it

26 June 2009, 12:13 PM   #3
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I flows beautifully.

26 June 2009, 08:41 PM    #4
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I love it. This is really amazing, and it really does flow together beatifully. 

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