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18 May 2009, 05:02 PM   #1
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Hello, I'm Nio and I'm new!
I wanted to share one of my Flower Poems with you!
Decliate and pink, you float through the air, Chisteld from Silk with so much care, Assosciated with the Ortient Kind, Worshiped in everyones mind, Small and soft to feel, Oh Cherry Blossom, at you beauty I kneel!

3 June 2009, 11:00 AM    #2
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You spelled some words wrong, and I don't understand "chisteld" and "ortient". Do you
mean "chisiled" and "orient"?

I think you meant it for it to be like this:

Delicate and pink, you float through the air,
Chisiled from Silk with so much care,
Associated with Orient Kind,
Worshiped in everyone's mind.
Small and soft to feel,
Oh Cherry Blossom, at your beauty I kneel!

There are a few mistakes, but other than that, I think it's beautiful!

It's very pretty and you use some really good words in it.

Do you have any more to share with us?


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