Once upon a time ago, two sisters were playing in the yard when suddenly yumi (the dark
one) pushed ami (the light one)
Into the road, two seconds later a car had hit ami. Her parents and the car driver came
screaming out and tears were falling down their face like a waterfall. They ran to ami to
see if she was all right, sadly...she died.
The funeral was on Sunday, everyone came (yes even yumi) when everyone was about to leave,
yumi ran up to ami's body and said "hey sis, thanks for leaving, heh heh, now I won't have
to worry about everyone saying how pretty u are and u getting all the attention! So again,
thanks! Well I got to go sis, luv ya bye!" yumi ran out the door smiling all the way.
That night after yumi had a shower and eaten, she went to bed. It took her about 3 seconds
to fall asleep.
"Yumiiii, hey yumi!" yumi opened her eyes and saw a boy about her age. He had black hair
and crimson eyes.
He looked at her smiling. "W-who r u?" yumi said stuttering. "Why I’m going to be your
Suddenly, the picture of her pushing her sister out into the road came up, as the car
about ran over her, the picture looked like it was being burnt. The next thing she noticed
is she was in a different room, or a hallway. She started walking down the hallway. She
finally came to this room where the door read “hell”. “Huh? Is this some kind of
Yumi started to bawl. “Hey now… if your good maybe, just maybe, we will go easy on
ya.” The boy said smiling. He opened the door, it was black then suddenly a deep voice
had risen up from what sounded like a horror movie! “ Come in hatie, and whose your
little friend there?” the voice sounded like the person was almost smiling.
“She’s the one who killed her own sister…what should we do with her?” hatie said
with a tense voice. “We could feed her to the spirits of hell, of we can make her roam
the earth for the rest of eternity?” the voice said. “Or we can make her say sorry to
her sis and make her The Devils Girl?” hatie said smiling. “W-what’s a devil
“A devil girl is when you scare the shit out of the people whose lives were created to
bring misery, like yours, and then you bring them down here and we find there punishment.
And it’s that or we rat your soul them u live in a life were happiness will never
come!” finally, she realized she was talking strait to the devil! Tears were streaming
down her face, she couldn’t hold them back, and then she tried to talk.
“I-I will do t-the first thing.” She said sitting on the floor crying. “Good
Then he pulled something like a rope and suddenly she was shot up into the shy.
She wasn’t screaming cause it felt like a dream. Then she reached to a golden gate.
She saw her sister on the other side. Yumi ran to her and started to cry.
“Sister I’m so sorry, I’m so sorry! Please forgive me! Everything I did was because
I was jealous it felt like I wasn’t loved, I’m sorry!” the tears wouldn’t stop.
Then suddenly the sun shined right on then. Then she knew that she was forgiven.
She looked up at her sister who was now smiling. Then the gates opened.
“God and the devil have both forgiven you. That means you can come with me.”
Ami said smiling! Yumi walked in and all her fears and regrets were gone and she was able
to live happily forever!