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Writing Chain #2

14 September 2007, 05:32 PM   #1
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Credit goes to cutie_kat for the idea. I figured, why not make another one for people who
aren't too fond of the other story. No offense to the creator of it[forget his name
 So I'ma start if no one minds. Next post so be patient.

14 September 2007, 05:35 PM   #2
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the person who started the story was the owner of this club, katochan D:<

Dont offend him or you'll get kicked out! lol jk. You can start.

14 September 2007, 05:36 PM   #3
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Also, don't come back with one sentence.

 April knew she had always been different. She was a spirited young girl, always fierce
but calm.'
 We have to write about ourselves. That's what I've wrote so far. I haven't always been
the greatest writer. But, I've still got a few years. I smiled at the thought of being
 A few months later... well only an hour, I was exagerrating... we were let out. Freedom
at last. I stepped in a pile of water. "Oh great, it's raining. Just move for me please?"
I laughed as I air-pushed the water away. To my amazement, the pavement infront of me was
clear. I grabbed my bag and decided to head off to...

14 September 2007, 05:37 PM   #4
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[ Ah! +whimpers+ I am sorry!    Lol. Thanks for the 'heads up' cutie. ]

14 September 2007, 05:44 PM   #5
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Kato's house. Kato is my 3rd best friend.

Not my BEST friend, no thats Miracle.

Not my 2nd best friend. Nope, that would be Clariisa.

No, he was my SECRET best friend. My GUY friend. I only liked him as a friend, and i
wanted it to be like that forever. It was a 
secret becuase in my class, guys and girls had a HUGE gap between them. So we never
talked. And that was a social rule.

My mom thought i would come straight home for dinner, but me and Kato had arranged a
meeting! I wanted to call her and go home but....but.......Kato thought I would be there!
I could NOT turn down my best....no 2ND best friend, now could I? I decided to-

14 September 2007, 05:52 PM   #6
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walk down the street to the food store. I grabbed a slush and paid for it at the counter.
I sat against the outside wall. I closed my eyes, picturing how that water had moved. It
had just been my imagination, no? Well, maybe Kato could tell me. He.. would he freak out
on me? I heard his voice.

14 September 2007, 05:57 PM   #7
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Last edited by cutie_kat, 14 September 2007
"Well, you look like your in deep thought. Am I right?" My face flushed a deep red, and i
treid to hide it with my Slush. Note to self: DONT poor Slush all over your face! I
immediatly wiped it off my face, as fast as I could. " i was just walking home from
school, and it was raining and i kicked the water away in a puddle because the water moved
and air-" Kato stopped my rambling with his voice. "Yo! You going a mile a minute! Start
with the basics!" I took his yellow American Eagle jacket and wiped all the slush out of
my eyes. "Um, well, you see.....

15 September 2007, 08:14 AM   #8
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"I was walking away from school. I asked this big puddle to move-"
 "You asked him?" He said sarchastically. 
 "Shush. I asked him to move and he did! I swear. I didn't want to tell you cause I
thought you wouldn't believe me..."
 He smiled. "...

16 September 2007, 03:19 PM   #9
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"Of course i believe you! You're not the lying type. I bet you an olympian goddess-" I
squealed in frustration "Eeeeeh! O SHUSH!! Really really happened, i swear. It did." He
gave me a look.

A weird look. one that said: 'okay, I believe you', but in a serious way, and sure enough,
he spoke,"okay...I believe you. It could've been luck. It could VERY easily have been
luck." He gave me a stern glare and waited for my response. But i didn't say anything, I
just nodded in agreement. Satisfied, he turned to walk away. I was actually kind of hoping
he would help me with my math project though....maybe tomorrow.  Even though i might've
agreed...it didn't feel like luck. Or wind. It felt like....obey.

Obeying. It felt like i was commanding the puddle to move. 
And it Obeyed.

Obeyed. I sat around for a bit, then looked at my watch. Augh!!! It's WAY paste dinner!
Crud, i would have to get hom really quick. But i needed to try one last time. I looked at
a far away puddle. Stared at it. Glared at it... Atleast a ripple, a wave...movement...
Obey. I wanted it to obey me....A gust of wind swayed the water to the left, and then it
fell back to place. I decided that it was-

18 September 2007, 04:13 PM    #10
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Posts: 20
not quite doing what I had wanted. My mind grew full of chaos and turmoil, rage and
frustration. Was I just making this whole thing up? NO! yes. NEVER! yes you did. NO I DID
NOT!!!!!!!! Suddenly my inner battle stopped at a single word inside my


It sounded like Kato.
When all are one and one is all,
When terrible leaders and cities fall,
When all hatred has been locked away,
Peace and love will be here to stay.

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