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29 April 2007, 10:23 PM   #1
Joined: 22 Apr 2007
Posts: 3
Please rate or review or criticize these poems:

SHADOW

A shadow stalking me
From far away
From my past
One bad day

A shadow stalking me
In my dreams
Turning to nightmares
Waking in screams

Forever haunting me
Never away
For more than a moment
Not one single day

I'll never be free
To laugh and be merry
I have to leave
I shall not terry

Ever running
Far away
From the past
From that day 

SEA PEOPLE

I listen closely to the waves
Crashing on the beach
I feel the wind brushing past
Its welcome cool reach

I hear the birds
And see the sand
I touch the ground
The sun-warmed land

I fall asleep
To dreams of days
To dreams of lives
Caught in the rays

The people clutching
To the sea
To the waves
To silent me
They hold me like
They know me well
Like they know my knowledge
Of every swell

Of the tides of night
The tides of day
The warming sun
The kids that play

They know my dreams
Like they see my fears
Like they see my hope
Like they see my tears

Every word
I never said
Seems written down
To be read

The words that were never
Ever spoken
The words that said
My heart was broken

30 April 2007, 07:34 PM   #2
Third in Command
Joined: 20 Apr 2007
Posts: 8
cOOL i Like them there actually good

1 August 2007, 12:14 AM    #3
Joined: 22 Apr 2007
Posts: 3
Thanks. ^_^



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