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14 July 2012, 01:32 PM   #1
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I created this more for a role play but it can be used as a story as well.


Angels and demons have been at war for centuries.... that is a story everybody knows.
Everybody knows of the legendary war between the two species. Its like the war between
vampire and demons. I live in Azrael City.... its a city of Angels protected by Dragons.
We have lived in peace for centuries. Away from war. Away from death. Our guardian dragons
protect us from the war. But I learned, you can't hide from war forever. It will
eventually find you. The Angel Demon War definitely found us. It even got the dragons
involved. They fought. Bloodshed covered our once peaceful land. Sometimes I wish the
fighting would stop. I lost my family in this war. My brother is all I have left and he
recently went to war. I want to runaway from this place but where do I go? First of all,
the city is surrounded by demons and I'll most likely die. Secondly, my family were all
here so I have no one to go too... I wish I could though. My name? Its Alice.

Idk if its good enough to actually write a story on. I mean angels and demons stories are
so common.

14 July 2012, 02:46 PM   #2
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I agree that the topic is a rather tired one; but if you want to write something, go for
it. If you can make the characters and style unique to your story, people will read it for
that.

...And this is just my inner punctuation Nazi, but I think this could stand to be two or
three different paragraphs. I don't know if this is just a particularly large paragraph,
or if you tend to write in a continuous bulk, which scares a lot of readers off.

Good luck~

14 July 2012, 03:44 PM    #3
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First of all, I organize paragraphs after the fact. Like if I decide to type it, I'll do
it in paragraphs. Its annoying when I'm writing. Plus this was for a role play.

Secondly, I love demons and anything demonic in nature especially fallens. I already
created my Alice character. Dimitri/Alexander might also play apart. I love those two.
Dimitri is a shadow demon and Prince Alexander are his shadows but also has a corrupted
human self that tries to have Dimitri kill people. I love those characters.



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