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5 August 2009, 02:26 AM   #1
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Last edited by ‹RushingStars★›, 6 August 2009
Well I finished my new drawing of Amanda!(that's what she's called).
I went from this:
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to this:
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I know it's not perfect. The neck is too short, and I;m sure there's other stuff wrong
with it. I also didn't make it exactly like my first one, as I made the hair longer, I
added the pink clips, I gave her eyebrows and pupils, and the mouth is differnt. But I
think it looks good!

5 August 2009, 02:28 AM   #2
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...Erm, is that a girl or guy?

5 August 2009, 02:45 AM   #3
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Last edited by ‹мιℓo⇨мιss⇨мυя∂εя›, 5 August 2009
That's extremely rude. I happen to think this a good first try! You shouldn't listen to them, Because there's many ways that this can be fixed!~ Well first you should widen her shoulders out some, and give her some elbows. Try different poses with your arms, and torso! Here's a pretty good tutorial you can use; http://timflanagan.deviantart.com/art/Basic-Female-Torso-Tutorial-4782959 I myself have problems with drawing hands, they're such a hassle >_< So I use reference for fingers! Here's what I use; Gideon's Hand Ref Pictures, Images and Photos Well I really hope you keep trying! You'll be really good one day : 3
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5 August 2009, 02:49 AM   #4
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Well, for starters, if it's your first time drawing a person, I think its good! I think
its hard to draw on the computer, and if this is your first drawing, then thats okay.
You'll improve over time. Um, I'd say that the arms are a little too short. (If you look
at your own hands and fingertips, your fingertips should reach mid-thigh. Although the
picture's discontinued, you should still imagine the legs and where the hands should be.
That'll create a more realistic-looking picture). You should also add eyebrows, and maybe
clean up the lineart a little. 
I think its a good start, and if you want to draw manga style, then you should maybe
analyze some manga-covers and practice sketching those, or watch ''how to draws'' from
some good artists. Or if you want to try more realistic drawings, I'd look at some ''how
to draw'' books or ask an artist for some tips. I'm hoping that I helped a little. Keep on
drawing!

5 August 2009, 02:50 AM   #5
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Oh! I really like the background colors ;D; Green is pretty~
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5 August 2009, 02:51 AM   #6
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Last edited by CLnekoo, 5 August 2009
yeah that was pretty rude :
but maybe she REALLY couldn't figure it out? which i doubt.
^^; oh well lets forget about that.

its a good first try! :D
we just need a bit more practice  :D
when i was a total noob at this drawing stuff
i always took real stuff as reference and observed each
part of them to see how i can make that part
more realistic in pencil. [people found me weird because i
stare too much xD ] and besides, i think i was 3
when i started drawing [circles scribbles
and stick people :D ] =_=" i only started using my
brain when i was 6 and started to appreciate art haha.
before you start looking at those tutorials  you should 
give another try at your own art , after which, thats 
when you should look at those tutorials, so you can
see all your mistakes 


goodluck <3 !

5 August 2009, 02:54 AM   #7
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Last edited by ‹мιℓo⇨мιss⇨мυя∂εя›, 5 August 2009
Agree with CL. Just sometimes with hands and stuff it's really frustrating and you may need to look at something xD Ah, I really hope to see more from you! Also, If you want to practice more and put it here you can use this site~ http://omgme.com
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5 August 2009, 02:55 AM   #8
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It is obviously a girl. Hello, breasts? o.o

Well, I think you deserve a pat on the pat. This is your first time drawing a person? On
the computer? I'd have to say that it's pretty good for someone who's completely new at
it. However there are a lot of mistakes with it.

Her face should be more defined and even. 
She needs a chin, and her neck should be a bit more thinner. 
Her nose is a bit lopsided and I think her mouth should be more up.
 Her shoulders are also uneven and her arms should be more longer and fuller. 
Her body also needs to more defined and her, erm, breasts more rounder. 
Her eyes are uneven, and I think she should have more hair. Also, that little line below
her neck looks sorta weird to me. 
I also think her dress her shirt's straps should be closer to the neck. 
Adding shading makes it more realistic. ^^
She also has no eyelids or eyebrows. 

Overall, I like the colors you used for this and the way they're sorta contrasting.
Practice makes perfect, and I'm sure you'll get the hang of it if you do it more. (I sure
know I did)

If you practice more on paper, I think that would help and try out new styles and see
which one fits you better. You can study different artwork and try to replicate it. I find
this helps when I'm trying to learn how to do something and it gives me an idea of how it
is done.

Practice, practice, practice!

Star for you. I hope this helps you! ^^

5 August 2009, 02:56 AM   #9
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but maybe she REALLY couldn't figure it out?
The erm, chest looks like a guy.

5 August 2009, 02:56 AM   #10
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Now that's just being a butthurt. :/ it doesn't look like a guy chest.
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5 August 2009, 02:58 AM   #11
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@ Denieru 

Er, there are roundish marks under where breasts are supposed to be and she's wearing a
girlish shirt. I mean, I think it's very, very obvious that it's a girl.

5 August 2009, 02:59 AM   #12
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Seriously.
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5 August 2009, 03:05 AM   #13
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The lines outside the chest are masculine.

5 August 2009, 03:21 AM   #14
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=__= Shut it, you aren't criting, or making suggestions.
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5 August 2009, 03:26 AM    #15
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I am. You shut it.
This is a crit. Don't focus on the chest, you might position it wrong.

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