Joined: 9 Jun 2008
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“Everyone asks me about Ben, so I will tell you about him.”
“He is the hottest guy is school, he moved here two years ago, and he lived in
California, but he got kicked out of the school, so they moved here.”
“So that’s how he got his great tan?” I asked.
“Yeah…but he doesn’t remember like anything about his old school which is odd.”
Then Audrey walked toward a big group of girls and introduced me to each one of them. Then
we ate lunch while talking, but I was more thinking. Remember the boy that got kicked out
of the school once in my life time? Well, that happened two years ago. Rumor has it that
he was sent down to the human world. He was on a mission to find out what the humans
thought about a flower. Rumor has that if you smelled the flower you could see the Angels
in the sky. Well, he failed. Not just failed, but really failed. He was supposed to smell
the flower, but instead he started dating a human girl. Yeah, Angels are supposed to stay
“So Natalie how did you get that great tan?” asked one of the girls, her name was
Avery. Great…now I had to make up a story about my great tan. Yeah, Angels have great
tans, because we live in the sky right by the sun.
“Our person kicked us out of the house, and we lived right by a beach, so we tanned,”
I said lying.
“Oh, but I worked for years on my tan, and it doesn’t get as dark as yours.”
“You know what it looks just like? Ben’s tan!” said Audrey.
“Yeah, it does!” said all the girls at the same time. Great…now they think I have
the same great tan as Ben’s, but he lived in California, and I live in the sky. Then the
bell rang, before any of us could say another word. I had to go to my locker, but Audrey
didn’t, and she said that she would meet me back at the classroom. I went to my locket
only to find a girl standing there, trying to open my locker. She looked like she was new,
so I hide behind a corner, while she keeps trying. Then I heard a voice behind me.
“She is new, too,” said the voice, and I turned around to see Ben.
“Who is she?” I asked.
“Her name is Lulu.”
“Oh,” I said.
“But my question is why is she trying to open your locker?” I knew right away. She
was the Evil. She was trying to open mine, so she could steal that great Angel costume
that I had to carry around everywhere I go.
“I don’t know,” I answered. Then he walked right up to her and said that it
wasn’t hers, and then she walked down the hall really mad. I said thanks to Ben, and
then walked to the same class with the same teacher. I wasn’t late, but I was close. The
day went by pretty slow, after that until the end of the day. Once the bell rang I walked
home alone. Then I heard a boom in the distance, and screaming, and even more screaming. I
ran home and turned on the news. There was a girl throwing bombs at people. Great, on my
first day I have to fight the Evil. I hurried and ran all the way there. I put on my Angel
costume behind a building. Wow did it feel great to have my wings again, and then my hair
changed from dark brown to light brown to hide me from who I was. I didn’t mind the
light brown looked better with my tan. I flew behind her, and shot my best spell that I
was taught, the bomb spell. Just like the Evil. She was caught off ground and fell to the
ground, but she got right back up, and she threw her bomb at me, but I noticed one thing.
It wasn’t a normal bomb, it was the gas bomb. I didn’t know the gas bomb spell, but my
brothers did, but all Angels knew what that bomb did. Either it would hurt you by hitting
you, or hurt you by the gas. My brothers told me the only way to get out of it, is to
catch it and throw it back at the person. I did what I was told. I caught it, and it was
about to release its gas, but threw it back. It hit her. Yes! Then she disappeared, and
that was my time to disappear, too. I flew back behind the building, and got my human
clothes back on. My hair color changed, wings disappeared, and my skin changed back to the
I ran back home, and turned back on the news. My new mom and dad were watching it, too.
They were surprised that the world was trying to be taken over.
“Wow, I can’t believe that angel saved us!” said my new mom.
“Yeah,” I said.
“Yeah, but the evil one did look like an angel, too.” That’s because Evils can
change shape, but I couldn’t tell them that. Instead I told them I had homework which is
true, and ran upstairs to do it in my new room. I finished it, and said good night, and
went to bed.
The next morning the sky was cloudy. That made me miss the sun we always had. I heard my
cell phone ring, so I answered it. This time it was Mrs. Angel.
“Good battle, but we sense more trouble today. Plus, we sense there is someone…”
Then she hung up. What about someone? Oh well, today is a new day. I got dressed, brushed
my hair, and then found a note. The note was from my new parents. They were saying that
they both had to work early and late, so they won’t see me for the whole day.
This time I skipped breakfast, and started walking to school. School was pretty boring
until I saw Evil. She had a scratched on her cheek. Even the most powerful Angel/Evil
can’t get rid of scratches, but we do make them heel faster. After the last bell ran I
went to my locker and opened it. Audrey was talking about the fight yesterday to some 6th
graders. Then I heard a voice on my left side.
“Hello, Angel,” said Evil.
“What?” I said, but Evil was walking away and only Ben was there.
“Are you OK?” he asked. I nodded my head. “Hey, do you want to see the new movie,
If Only Was I an Angel?” I really did want to see the movie, but not with Ben. I just
wanted to see how well and close the movie was to the real Angles. I said yes, and we
walked to the movie theater. Ben paid for the two tickets, and some snakes, too. Finally,
we walked into the room where we were supposed to go to watch the movie. The movie was
boring. The angels were nothing like the real Angels. Then bang! It wasn’t the movie,
because it was right when the two angels were going to kiss. Everyone started freaking. I
ran to the door, but found it was locked. I ran to the top of the seats. Then heard Ben
scream for my name. I didn’t listen to him. I reached the top, and ducked and got
changed. Then I saw the Evil. She cut the screen, and flew out. She didn’t notice me,
but I knew she knew that I was there. I flew after her, and pushed her. She knew I was
going to do that, but I didn’t care. She didn’t move.
“Hello, Angel,” she said in an evil voice.
“Hello, Evil,” I said, and then I noticed my voice changed, too. Then she caught me
off guard. She threw the bomb spell at me. I flew to the ground. I landed on the ground
hard, and worst than that my wing couldn’t move. That didn’t stop me though. I grabbed
my cell phone, and hit the wing button. I heard them come, and so did Evil, because she
disappeared. My Angel friends came. Eva saw me first and flew down.
“OMG!” said Eva. “Guys look over here!”
“Oh no! Are you OK?” asked Violet. They helped me up, and then we asked everyone to
move out of the door way. We combined our power and blasted the bomb spell, and the door
opened. Everyone ran out of there. The last person was Ben. I would, have to catch up with
him. I said bye to my Angel friends, and changed, and ran out of there looking for Ben.
Finally, I found him walking out the front doors. I ran after him
“Ben!!” I yelled. He turned around and saw me.
“Where were you?”
“Looking for you,” I lied.
“Oh. Well, do you want to go out for ice cream since our movie got ruined?”
“Sure,” I said while we walked down the street. It was really, hard to walk, because
I had a battle, and I almost lost! Plus, I hurt myself really bad. I started to silent
punish me, but then I got pulled away, and almost hit five people!
“What?” I said to Ben, because he pulled me away.
“We are here, and I was trying got tell you that, but you kept talking. Finally I
dragged you in here.”
“Oh,” I said while blushing. I looked at all the flavors, and decided on Angel
Strawberry. We had an ice cream that was called the same thing, and I was hoping it would
taste the same, because I missed home. The guy handed me my ice cream, and Ben paid for
the two cones we got. He sat down right by the window. I sat on the other chair, and
licked my ice cream. Figures I thought! It tasted nothing like I thought it would taste
like. Anyways, I learned a lot about Ben. He seemed like a nice guy.
“One thing that I do wish I could change is that I would be at my old school still,”
said Ben, and hten noticed the time.
“Sorry, but I have to go!” I said while out of the door, and all the way back to my
“Where have you been?” asked my new mom. I had even made up a nickname for her…NM.
Plus, the man was ND.
“Oh, just out for ice cream with some friends,” I lied.
“It is eight pm!” said ND. “Yu are ground for a week.” Right…I was suppose to
be home at 6:30 pm.
“That means you only go to school, and then come right back,” said NM. Wait! Then how
was I supposed to fight off the Evil? I went to bed right after they told me that. I
dialed Mrs. Angel through, because I needed a lot of help.
“I know! You just need to sneak out of the house. They will be watching TV anyways, so
it doesn’t really matter,” said Mrs. Angel. I hung up. So that means they were
watching me, and she knew why I called. I fell asleep really fast, but woke up in the
middle of the night only to see the sky red as a bomb. Great I though. This time without
changing I said the magic words, Angel Power. Yes! It worked. I was in my costume, and
already flying through the night. I followed where the color red was the brightest. This
time Evil wasn’t there, but people was hurt really bad. I started to get help. Then I
went back home realizing that she was up to something. Next day was so boring! I mean now
can you go through school, witching dance, and stuff to do! This time after school Ben
asked me if I wanted to go to his house. I said I couldn’t go, because I was grounded.
He thought of a good idea, though. I would tell NM and ND that I was going to a friend’s
house to study and do homework. Once I told them that they were with it. We walked to
Ben’s house, and no one was home. He said he was always home alone. I put down my
backpack right by the door. I followed Ben into the living room. It was huge! It even had
a flat screen TV. “So,” said Ben while sitting down on the couch. I sat down, too.
‘Don’t know,” I said.
“Me either,” he said, and then he leaned toward me, and kissed me. My cell ran. It
was Mrs. Angel. I told Ben I had to go to the bathroom.
“Nat! What are you doing?” asked Mrs. Angel. Oh no! She was ready to kick me out of
the sky, because she knew I was dating a human.
“Just fitting in,” I said.
“Oh, well, nice job with it,” said Mrs. Angel and hung up. I opened the door, and
found Ben standing right there. Then he grabbed me and pushed me against the wall, and we
made out. It was amazing! I mean back up in the sky I made out before, but it wasn’t as
well…let’s just say open mouth and touchy. Anyways, we made out for ten minutes, and
then we did our homework.
“So if 2x4+3 is 11 then how many kisses do I get now?” Ben asked.
“None,” I said while pushing him back away from my face.