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6 August 2009, 05:31 PM   #1
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Last edited by ‹Luvvy♥›, 6 August 2009

Took me 1 hour and 31 minutes to draw.
Hm. I know something wrong with it.
But I can't seem to pinpoint what it is.
Please tell.
=3


And also how to colour it properly.
I know I did really bad at colouring it.

Thanks.
=3

And I used mouse for this.
So its was pretty hard to do.
For me anyway.

6 August 2009, 05:36 PM   #2
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Woah there~
That looks like Orihime from bleach. xD

But yeah, you should clean the lines and coloring a bit more to make it neater...
The lines shouldn't be wobbly.
And eye line thickness should be a little more thicker than the rest.
The rest is well done. -thumbs up-

6 August 2009, 08:57 PM   #3
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Its probably the eye lashes. the skin is over lapping it.
and its better if you color the clip too :D 

this is very cute ^-^

6 August 2009, 09:08 PM   #4
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Yeah. Both points. But also, now that I look at it; the right eyebrow 0__0

Compared to the left, it's almost...urr acting of it's own accord. And yeh, fill in the
the lashes black. And just a tiny thing is that her neck bends. You've thought that
because it's the end of the pic, it's the end of her neck. But it should stay going in one
direction. Unless she has an adam's apple or just has a curvy neck.

8 August 2009, 10:54 AM    #5
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Ok Thanks.
=3

I'll edit it now,
:D



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