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29 July 2009, 01:58 AM   #1
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Last edited by ‹Syndromic_Wonderland›, 29 July 2009
Finally! I finally get to post something. ^u^

I dunno if the picture will show, but I'll try.
This is my best oekaki yet, though there are a lot of mistakes. I think the anatomy is off
a bit, and the shading is not well done. The hat is also awkward, lol.

Criticism appreciated, thank you.

29 July 2009, 02:11 AM   #2
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
The hat seems to be falling off her head. And the head is a bit flat on the top part of
her head and her arms are a bit skinny.
I like the hat though, and the flag is really adorable. Though the background could have
been a brighter color :d Good job~
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Are painted over in black

29 July 2009, 02:18 AM   #3
Joined: 12 Jul 2009
Posts: 22
I agree that the flag is adorable.
For the head being at a tilt I think the winking eye should have been a bit lower.
However it is an overall nice piece.

29 July 2009, 07:35 AM   #4
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-the flag is epic xD
-the concept is great :D
-the character design seems nice too :D

now for criticisms :D
-the hat does seem like it's gonna fall off ...
-the eye isn't even [just lower the winking eye  ]
-you kinda need to even out the shoulders ^^;
-i think you should move her [the character i mean.. ] higher.. 
unless you were planning to put her on the bottom [which i dont think so]
-her arms .. are too straight :|

well just a bit more practice, like everyone else here xDDD

this is a good piece of artwork <3 :D

29 July 2009, 09:50 AM    #5
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Thank you! <3
This really helped a lot to point out my mistakes. ^u^

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