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17 June 2011, 12:44 AM   #1
Joined: 12 Jun 2011
Posts: 53
Last edited by ‹hypnohsis›, 17 June 2011
That small little lake,
I loved it
That cozy little fire,
Want to repeat it?
Those sweet nothings,
 I lost it.
I lost it all.

That little bitty sign,
But then something came along.
Those goosebumps of anxiety,
Did I really want it?
Something growing inside me,
Make it go away.
Won't you please make it go away?

Time is ticking,
I want to dissapear.
The clock is turning,
I want to change it back.
When the clock stikes 9,
It's nearly time.
Just get it out.

A needle through the skin,
Is this almost over?
A silent cry for help,
I'm having second thoughts.
Shaky legs as I stand up,
Did I just kill my baby?
And it's all over. You ended it. Let it slip away. It's all over.
  I absolutely love this stlye of poetry. The whole normal/bold thing? Although I don't
think to fondly of this poem. So, does anybody else like this style of writing? Tell me,
please C: 
P.S. There are three ways to read it. As a whole, only the bold, or only the normal font.

17 June 2011, 01:43 AM   #2
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For a poem about abortion, it's good.

17 June 2011, 10:27 AM    #3
Joined: 12 Jun 2011
Posts: 53
Sankyu! Yeah, abortion is a touchy subject. That's why I though it would be perfect for
this style, because of the hidden messages.

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