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19 December 2009, 06:07 PM   #1
Joined: 31 Jul 2009
Posts: 22
Err I stayed up till 3AM to finish this. o-o
Crit please? c:


19 December 2009, 08:14 PM   #2
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
Wow, that's eyecatching!
that hair is cool >_<
But... what is up with the chest?
it looks like you just put an oval thingy there e.e
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

19 December 2009, 08:21 PM   #3
Joined: 31 Jul 2009
Posts: 22

Thank you, hmmm I'm not sure 'bout the chest. Wait you mean the blue thing? o-o

19 December 2009, 08:24 PM   #4
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
No, like yoiu made a manequin and it's one long.. uniboob.
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

19 December 2009, 08:29 PM   #5
Joined: 31 Jul 2009
Posts: 22

Ah I see it now. 0: Thanks for pointing that out. c:

19 December 2009, 08:31 PM   #6
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
Welcome ^^
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

19 December 2009, 10:08 PM   #7
Joined: 20 Jul 2009
Posts: 128
OMG AWSOME~!! I LUV GUMI! :]
i personally think she';s better then most of the Vocas.

Banner made by me

19 December 2009, 10:21 PM   #8
Joined: 6 Dec 2009
Posts: 4
dude that is one sexy art ~ <3333 
i'm serious i bet you worked really hard on it o ^ o 
either way it really shows how hard you tried xD it's beautiful <3 
the chosen colors is well picked. :] 

I dont like giving critics buut ~ 

The head is too big. But, really I don't think people can tell because all your other
skills blocks that xD 
If you're trying to make it a little more popped out unlike the ones that shows flatness
you've done the shadings pretty well.
The googles isn't that realistic looking though more like flat > o < 
but how you colored it makes it look a little more not flat? xD You should try adding some
more details for the goggles. 
Love your cloth ~ I mean seriously 8D it's really adorable <3 
I think you messed up on the collar ? is it a collar? well anyways the thing that is
strapped around her neck and to your right . The cloth strapped around her wrist somewhat
bothers me o_o It's like the girl just taped it on her. rofl xD 
and this is like what I have trouble the most too D: 
one arm is longer then the other. 
I SHOULD STOP o _o;; 
I think this is how far i shall say D: I feel awful now > _ < 
But thE ART IS GREAT I LOVE IT ~ I dont think a lot of people can find these kind of
mistakes. Adding more details will make the 
drawings come a little more realistic :o 
but yeah IM SAYING THIS ART IS ADORABLE IGNORE WHAT I SAID D:

19 December 2009, 10:27 PM   #9
Joined: 31 Jul 2009
Posts: 22

@Hyung
Thank you. :D
YEEEEES THANK YOU THAT'S WHAT I NEEDED. 8D
I got problems with heads. ~w~ Kekeeke. I'll fix that when the next time. c:

20 December 2009, 11:19 AM   #10
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
Love the eyes. In case, iMickey hasn't said it already, so:
The eyes are too far down on her face. And the goggles seem like they are stuck right on
her head, so draw it so that the hair covers it partially. The hair shine thing on her
bangs don't really make sense. Curve it so that it follows the shape of her hair. 
Her shirt confuses me. At the armpit, it's like the shirt is attached to her skin and
under her mini jacket, she has a waist. Draw it so that under the arm, it curves in. 
Her forearm is too short, so yeh. :D

Though dude, I can't draw that well at all. So I feel uber bad for criticing so darn
harshly D: Ignore me if you wish.
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK

20 December 2009, 02:31 PM   #11
Joined: 7 Sep 2009
Posts: 53
You pic of her is better than Mine
http://kupika.com/pics.php?id=i4b2e0b5106d6cvgvc8p


On your you stuck to the original charater but the wrist thing on her right hand is
different to her other one

I agree with lollylove on the highlight of the bangs

For her googles you need to draw the frame around them with different thinkness i.e.
thiner at the bach and wider at the frount so they look less flat on top of her head
I don't really see a problem with her head/size of it


The hair is nicly coloured as is all of it ><
and the propotions on the arms is good becuase It's in perspective


Yar thats all 

SORRY FOR BEING SO MEAN
'When life thows you lemons keep them because hey, free lemons'

21 December 2009, 12:34 AM   #12
Joined: 31 Jul 2009
Posts: 22

I don't find it mean. :D 
Hmmm...I think I need a redline or something. o-o But thanks guys! :D

21 December 2009, 08:48 AM   #13
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
Last edited by lollylovex3, 21 December 2009
Redline? Sure, I'll do one :3

Alright, I'm not the best artist around, so this sucks.  orz orz. Kill me if you want.
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
-IMITATION BLACK

21 December 2009, 02:36 PM   #14
Joined: 7 Sep 2009
Posts: 53
Waha loving the google design not so sure on how far the eyes go up ><
'When life thows you lemons keep them because hey, free lemons'

21 December 2009, 07:56 PM    #15
Joined: 31 Jul 2009
Posts: 22

@LollyLove
asdasdsanslfsafjasf I LOVE YOU. THANK YOU. ♥ ;3;


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