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WRITING: Poetry: Reflections

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1 August 2009, 01:45 PM   #1
Joined: 2 Jul 2009
Posts: 26
Last edited by Oroborus21, 21 August 2009
I look at the darkness,
What do I see?
I see nothing,
The reflection of me.
I feel it surrounding me, 
Rendering me whole.
Wind flows around me,
Chilling me till I'm cold.
I look in the mirror,
Long black hair,
I hate the looks,
The anger,
The stares.
A tear slips down my cheek,
I open my mouth,
But only sounds I can speak.
Ths one world,
Where everyone is the same,
The warriors get the glory,
Celebrities the fame.
It pays to be different,
A solid, soul-baring price,
In this unjust world where people are either mean or nice.
I look in the mirror,
The scars,
The tears.
I look in the mirror,
The Anger,
The Fears.
I run my hands through my hair,
Smile and pretend I don't care.
I look once more in the mirror,
And what do I see?
I see a strange girl.
She's the reflection of me.

21 September 2009, 04:16 AM   #2
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
this is a pretty introspective poem, i liked how there was rhyme but it wasnt forced or
patterned more free flowing ina way,

nice imagery and a lot of soul searching on this one

21 September 2009, 10:30 PM   #3
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I look;;
I breathe;;
I smile;;
I blink;;
I move;;
I disappear;;

It repeats :D
i <3 mirrors

::truthfully, I think mirrors are scary

23 September 2009, 11:31 AM    #4
Joined: 2 Jul 2009
Posts: 26
Thanks guys!!!!

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