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WRITING: Poetry: Goodbye

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30 April 2009, 11:36 PM   #1
Joined: 20 Mar 2009
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Last edited by ‹In♥His♥Shadow›, 1 May 2009
I run to my room, scared out of my mind
I look to the floor, and what do I find?
A puddle of blood, soaking my feet
What untimely fate shall I meet?
I search myself for wounds, not one in sight
I try not to shudder with all my might
When I see where the source of all the crimson is
I see my heart, and I listen to every word it says;
"If someone dares to tie you down,
Take your faith, run you around,
Run run run, for it will be too late
If you hand your life over to fate."
So I shattered my window with my bare hands
I ran and ran to my hearts demands
For this world has been dragging me down
Why even worry when you can just leave town?
The buses sign read "We can all start new."
So I took my leap of faith, and I left you.

This is about me and my.. ex friend.
Po-e-try makes me happyyyy.

1 May 2009, 04:37 PM   #2
Joined: 21 Mar 2009
Posts: 22
Last edited by mextreehugger, 1 May 2009
That was wonderful ! I love the hectic rhythm .
draging me down
You spelled that wrong , though . And I love you're signature . :] I feel the same way .
x Each night I wish upon a star I'll run and run , oh so far . To get away from this normal place To hide the pain of your taken face . x </3

1 May 2009, 11:50 PM    #3
Joined: 20 Mar 2009
Posts: 28
Thanks! And I could've sworn I'd fixed that, d'oh! XD Oh well. 

But yeah, this is probably my first or second poem that actually rhymes.  
Po-e-try makes me happyyyy.

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