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WRITING: Poetry: You Really Got Me

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12 April 2009, 02:07 AM   #1
Joined: 21 Mar 2009
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Last edited by ‹In♥His♥Shadow›, 12 April 2009
"You Really Got Me"

My heart is racing, 
Our faces are flushed. 
Your eyes linger longer than they should;
"Are you staring?" 
And now he is touched,
Hands are held as hearts intertwine,
Forever melded...

But it never lasts, like it should,
It never does.
That's not what the crush is.
Ripping, slashing, destroying,
Each piece sewn together descends,
Descends toward the bitter end,
It's not worth it.

Who am I kidding?
I loved him, his every humor, 
His laugh, his smile,
And at the time..
I'd run the extra mile for him,
And die for him,
Give it all for him.

And what?
What did I keep for me, 
Did I even phase him?
Graze his emotions in the least? 
Lies, lies, lies.

Three months later I pick up the phone,
The sad smile appears in my mind.
I want to heal him, help him,
mend him.. 
It is all heard in his voice, 
"I messed up."

(no real inspiration for this one that I feel like mentioning.. this is old.)
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12 April 2009, 03:20 AM   #2
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
Posts: 212
its lovely

in the second stanza what do you mean by "thats not what the crush does"?

12 April 2009, 06:02 PM    #3
Joined: 21 Mar 2009
Posts: 28

It's supposed to mean that the crush is never everlasting, and this it just destroys
things. Like "Is a crush everlasting? No, that's not what a crush is." Hmm. Maybe I should
change it to that? XDD
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