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5 April 2007, 01:20 AM   #1
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alright if you have a poem that you want to share then go head juss type it up no one can
judge you here and if someone does there out imeadeatly i mean some critisim but nothing
like get the hell over it and crap

21 May 2007, 08:32 PM   #2
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darkness is my favorite element
flowing through everything with hatred
it has no end in time 
for darkness rules us all

true emo poetry style

21 May 2007, 10:25 PM   #3
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In a forest all alone
Mother is worrying at home
After school I ran here fast
Let this day be my last
Pull out my blade and start to cry
Knowing today Im going to die
Too late to back down
Hold my blade to my throat and start to frown
Five minutes passed, now Im on the ground
       -My Blade, My End

26 July 2007, 08:21 PM   #4
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sorry this one is so long................ 

i cried and you hurt me, i loved you and you betraid me. love never found me. i tried to
get away from you and you scarred me, trusted about you and you fucked me up. i dont think
trust found me eather. i dont love you-but love you more than life itself, but than again
my life is nothing. 

                                                     i love you anyway.

*emo by gothgurl*

7 August 2007, 06:51 PM   #5
Joined: 9 Jul 2007
Posts: 2
"to my life's end"

"This is my life's end, my very last breath. There is no purpose for me, so I am now
facing death. What went wrong? I don't remember.  But now my heart, has dimmed like an
ember. You said you didn't need me, and that small strife, is making me want to lose my
life. It's all your fault, U were not true. It's all your fault that I'm so blue. So,
instead of killing me, I'm gonna' kill you."


8 August 2007, 03:04 AM   #6
Joined: 8 Aug 2007
Posts: 9
mine is actually more like a song but here it is...

Life is just a waist of time, and in my mind I’m just not fine.
The world is full of pain and harm, bleeding cuts all down my arm.
I constantly just want to cry, and I always want to die.
All I want to do is scream, my whole life is one bad dream. 
People wonder why I’m pissed, I tell them I’m in a black abyss.
I’m walking through a living hell, stuck up in my prison cell.
I’v got to comfortable with this knife, I think I’m gona take my life.
Why is my life so damn useless, found my gun maybe I’ll use this,
I wish someone would just stab me, that would probly make me happy,
I’ll drown myself in the ocean, jump from a car that’s still in motion,
Light a bomb and then just hold it, my life story is like I told it.

27 August 2007, 02:15 AM   #7
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these are all amazing =)

27 August 2007, 02:18 AM   #8
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Disturb, I like yours a lot 

Here's something I wrote up tonight:

It was dark…

A wall of black surrounded me on all sides. It was cramped here, the air stale from lack
of circulation. My lungs took in the same old muggy air in and out. My body sat on a floor
of cold steel, a slippery and bare surface that slid uncomfortably against my butt. As I
reached out my hands, they touched the same cold steel surface. I was trapped…

I felt scare, as anyone would feel in my situation. Enclosed in a prison box, being rocked
by the motion of a truck, too scare to scream out… Fear becomes your only friend, and
you must bear his taunts and teases for the eternity of your imprisonment. He is cloaked
in a garb of darkness, you can’t see him, but you can hear him…his voice spills into
your mind. 

Fear’s voice was not the only sound. There was the rumbling of the trucks frame, the pop
of the wheels as it hits a peddle on the road. The wheels were turning fast, you can feel
it, the truck accelerating ever so slightly each minute…going faster…faster….and

Until I felt it slowed. 

My body was lurched to the side, the effect of inertia as the truck makes a right turn.
Then a sudden stop, a muffled honk. I heard the sound of cars; the familiar sound of
traffic. The truck lurched forward again, my body flung to the back. I felt turns, left
and right, then left again. I heard the sound of wheels rubbing on gravel. Then again, the
truck slows…and rolls to a stop. 

I arrived…wherever it was…

27 August 2007, 02:25 AM   #9
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I sit there in the night
I take out mii silver knife
I see the tears of fright
Gettin ready to destroy mii life
i cut down deep
i relieve the pain
i want to sleep 
just listening to the rain
bleeding out
ready to shout

27 August 2007, 02:34 AM   #10
Joined: 27 Aug 2007
Posts: 8
^ I like it 

27 August 2007, 02:35 AM   #11
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Feel the darkness take it in
i shall believe its not a sin
take the blade and cut it deep
hold your tears dont weep
Breathe in the Fear
hold it dear
Keep the emotions to your self
keep your heart on the top shelf
cut it out but keep it close
because that one thing u need the most 
so do not fear use the pain
urself you shall regain

27 August 2007, 02:36 AM   #12
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thanks i like yurs to

27 August 2007, 02:42 AM   #13
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Merci lol.

27 August 2007, 02:48 AM   #14
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lolz why merci?

27 August 2007, 02:59 AM    #15
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I'm Canadian, yu use french from time to time lol.

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