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WRITING: Poetry: Skank in the Halls


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17 December 2009, 01:45 AM   #1
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( i already posted this in my diary , but i figured i'd post it here for actual feedback . whatchu think .. ♥ ) she stumbles up the steps, papers falling from her books. blue eyes encased in crimson people can't help but look. maybe they're all right .. straightening herself up, she brushes back her hair ; the rumours flying through the halls , the lies they just aren't fair . don't let them see you hurting . vodka still lingers on her tongue from drinking the night before; the bottles she emptied by the phone filled with texts , "you're such a whore." i was just flirting. the words they run deep and cut into her wrists , she puts on a smile ; her hands balled in fists . "hey sweetcheeks, need some fun tonight?" a tap on the ass & her face is red; the guys are all laughing "we heard you give head ." biting her lip , she averts her eyes "real cheap lay, " they're screaming , are they lies ?
oh so insane . ♥

17 December 2009, 02:30 AM   #2
Joined: 23 Jul 2009
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very cool I love it!

17 December 2009, 02:40 AM   #3
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It's sad... But I love it. 

Made my heart drop a bit. xD

Good job. :D

17 December 2009, 02:41 AM   #4
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I am writing one about me right now stay online to read that XD

23 December 2009, 01:08 AM   #5
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thanks guys ! ♥ sexlayla ; & haha i know , sadd things high school is .
oh so insane . ♥

23 December 2009, 02:31 AM   #6
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^ You can say that again. xD Middle school too I think anyway. 

23 December 2009, 03:12 AM   #7
Joined: 22 Jun 2009
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haha of course . rough times for all ):
oh so insane . ♥

23 December 2009, 03:11 PM   #8
Joined: 23 Jul 2009
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I agree grr i hate school

23 December 2009, 05:27 PM   #9
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This was really well-written. Very touching subject.

23 December 2009, 07:56 PM   #10
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XD its like you are writing about me!

23 December 2009, 08:44 PM   #11
Joined: 3 Oct 2009
Posts: 11
good
love isn't really immortal, right?

29 December 2009, 01:55 AM    #12
Joined: 22 Jun 2009
Posts: 32
thank you . (: & haha i try for stuff people can somewhat relate to . danks (:
oh so insane . ♥


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