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18 July 2009, 01:10 AM   #1
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Last edited by brigoesBOOM, 18 July 2009
This is my latest drawing, and I know I need help with my anatomy and details. I'm also
not used to drawing full bodies that much >_< But I did have fun drawing it. I learned
that the airbrush tool is quite useful (: I desperatley want to improve my art.
Suggestions, anyone?

18 July 2009, 01:28 AM   #2
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 14
So you want help on anatomy? I might be able to help. :]
What I like to use now is the water color tool, and using the pen tool also helps with the
coloring. :D
Isn't the leg meant to be resting on the knee, and her index finger and ring finger seem a
bit weird too.

But you did very good! I absolutly love her lips, and the eyelashes! 
You did a very good job, and I hope I helped slightly (probably not though xD)!

18 July 2009, 01:32 AM   #3
Joined: 15 Jul 2009
Posts: 39
This looks very nice! I think the hand is alittle bit deformed....you shaded the shirt really nice and the pants(realisticly) and well...I don't know what to say except that the picture is very pretty! and now I don't really see what to critic on....(since everything looks perfectly fine)

18 July 2009, 01:48 AM   #4
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I really like the colors and the pose of the body and I'm a sucker for a good background
(Which you have!).
All I have to say is try to make the lines a little bolder and straighter, then work on
your shading and you've got it made!


18 July 2009, 01:58 AM   #5
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Thankyou for the positive comments guys, and the critiques! (:
I'll take it all to heart and try to work on it :P

18 July 2009, 10:52 AM   #6
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Ahh I remember this picture! I'm pretty sure I commented it saying
how much I love the lips, which I still do :3
But yeah, I really love your style, it's super cute~

And really I think your anatomy is really quite good,
you're on a great start <3

As for what wrong with it, I think the head is much too big :O
That's really what throws all the proportions off.
Also the way you drew her armpit area is a little crazy, it looks like
she's missing part of her body. And since it's a slight side view
you should be able to see some of her like going-into-back
area stuff. D: Ahh I'm not very good at explaining this!
Anyways, I made you a redline!
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I scaled down the head and stuff, and as you can see, that alone
just really changes the picture. Also her hair is a little too poofy near where
the ears are, and that kind of makes it look like they're just floating there.
I also fixed up the hand a bit because it was at a fairly strange angle.

But anywhoo, I hope this helps!
You're doing really great so far! <33

18 July 2009, 06:30 PM    #7
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That helps a bunch :D
Thank you very much (:

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