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WRITING: Poetry: untitled poem

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11 March 2009, 04:27 PM    #1
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inspired by Kamino and to some extent Onnachan, not sure if its finished or what

started it a few weeks back..i dont know if it sucks or not...

(untitled so far)

If I said I loved you
A time or two
A million times
Would be too few

But words alone
Seem so in vain
They're washed away
Within my pain

of longing
of needing

Of praying for strength
But not succeeding

The more you give
The more I thirst
My heart swells up
And seems to burst

Who was the liar
That said Love's a fire
Or compared it to
An August rain

Love is cold
Like a razorblade
I slice my soul 
But bleed in vain

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