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18 April 2008, 10:49 PM   #1
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where you can find her stories

18 April 2008, 10:54 PM   #2
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Uhhhhh thats not my quizzilla account..!!!???
Writing is cool deal with it ^.^

18 April 2008, 10:57 PM   #3
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ok thx.. for my first story.. stroll down..
Writing is cool deal with it ^.^

18 April 2008, 10:57 PM   #4
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well you can go to yours and get the web address so others can go and read them 

18 April 2008, 11:08 PM   #5
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Canuk's Story Chapter 1

"Canuk! Your relatives are here!" Mother JoJo said. "Tell my Irish relatives to get the
hell out."
"CANUK! Irish is your HERITAGE!" JoJo replied. "Too bad I don't belive in the thing called
'magic'."
"Well you belive in God and that's good enough." "Yeah, yeah." Canuk fidled with her
perfectly straight orange hair. Her mother was cooking something that smelled of string
beans and potatoes. Canuk smelled it and quiched. Dusgusting. "Oh my little Canuk! What I
pleasure to see you all the way in The United States!" Her aunt Jackette admired "Yep."
Was Canuk's only answer. "Your cousin's are dieing to meet you!" Jackette sang. "Oh, well,
they aren't dead." Canuk snickered. "What a great sense of humor you've got!" Jackette
admired once again. Canuk peered over at her two cousins. She gasped. One was a girl that
looked much like Canuk. Then a boy that had short brown hair. But what surprised her most
was the Spell Book her girl cousin was carrying.

                                                         TO BE CONTINUDE
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18 April 2008, 11:17 PM   #6
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cool i like it :D

19 April 2008, 01:46 AM   #7
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Thanks its gonna be big i think
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19 April 2008, 02:08 AM   #8
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keep working on it- one day it will be

19 April 2008, 04:40 PM   #9
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I like it....alot!

20 April 2008, 01:50 PM   #10
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I like it, a lot and want to read more. But you should try separtating them into proper
paragraphs. Like when someone new is talking, is a new paragraph.

21 April 2008, 09:13 PM   #11
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yeah! I found that out be4 so I should do it LOL.
Imma gonna write the 2 chapter now yay!
Writing is cool deal with it ^.^

21 April 2008, 09:30 PM   #12
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Canuks Story Chapter 2

"Hi Canuk! Nice to meet you chara." The girl intruduced herself and her brother,
"I'm Cilku, and this is my brother Fredren."

Canuk just stood blankly at Cilku and the Spell Book. She looked pale.

"Say something Canuk! SAY SOMETHING!" JoJo shouted.

"Oh its ok, Joe, she's just shy." Jackette said as she glanced over at Canuk and wondered
why she looked so pale.

Canuk sputtered "But.. she.. the book..her..pale."

Cilku glanced at Fredren and gave a knowingly look as to say 'Told ya'.

"Dinner is served." JoJo protested as she looked at Fredren to see how hungry he is.

"Cilku, don't try to get Canuk into this.. she lives in the USA for crying out loud! Just
be her friend.. not what you think is going to happen." Jackette said as she pushed Cilku
into Canuk's room.

"Yeah, but she looked uneasy at the Spell Book so do you think I should tell her?"

"I know you shouldn't make things more complicated as it already is, Cilku."

"Don't you think telling her would make things more easy for our family?"

"Yes.. but don't say anything, Cil."

"Ok then we better not say a word now.. becuase Canuk is listening!" Cilku reasoned.

"Promise you won't tell?"

"I might."

"Ok fair enough now lets eat supper."
Writing is cool deal with it ^.^

22 April 2008, 01:16 AM   #13
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i like it 

22 April 2008, 02:19 AM   #14
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To be Continude
Writing is cool deal with it ^.^

23 April 2008, 01:33 AM    #15
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Canuk's Story Chapter 3

Cilku pushed open Canuk's door and ignored Canuk as if nothing happened. Jackette did the
same.

At the dinner table Fredren whispered something to Cilku and she nodded.

Canuk still looked as if she had seen a ghost.

"My, my, not hungry Can?" Jackette said.

"Uh, not really I think I ate to much before hand."

"Don't be silly, Canuk! You only ate a banana!" JoJo said sternly.

"Yeah, a banana too much." Canuk sighed as she drank a sip of her rice milk.

Cilku smiled everything was going as planned. Jackette gave Cilku a cross look but Cilku
ignored it.

"Soo, Canuk, I hear your on the hockey team! Nice job!" Jackette said as she paused the
question. "Are ya winning?"

"Nope." Canuk said as she sank into her chair, "And it's too bad too, we could of won if
it wasn't for Chile Bradley. He's the best player ever!"

"Oh but your the best player for a girl right?" Cilku said with a mysterious smile
on her face.

"Uh, I guess." Canuk said with an uneasy feeling in her stomach, Cilku made her feel
wierd.

"Okay, enough of this stupid talk I wanna get into what's happining in my life."
Fredren said.

Cilku was surprised she thought he was going along with the plan, she nudged him in the
shoulder.

Jackette went along with it with a smile pressed on her face. "Yes, Fred, what is going
on?"

"IM WINNING MY VIDEO GAME!" Fredren screached.

Canuk was utterly stunned and automaticly jumped out of her seat. "AGH!" She screamed as
she ran to her room.

Cilku was astonished yet pleased. Fredren was going to help her.
Writing is cool deal with it ^.^

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