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Epic Phail

16 August 2009, 04:47 PM   #1
Joined: 15 Jul 2009
Posts: 39
Last edited by ‹♪♫LuLuu♪♫›, 16 August 2009
If your wondering why I named it Epic Phail, It's because me and a friend of mine(AudioSurf) are gonna make a manga called "E and L's Epic Phail" Oh and I'll give Credit to Kyun_yo and nomnomg for the great idea! Constructive Critisizm please!

16 August 2009, 05:26 PM   #2
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uwaaa you guys are going to make a manga??
show me how you progress k??? 8D

It's very prettyyyy
but now to point out the criticism..
-- the rough linessss [just even it out, it's kinda jagged, that
causes the picture to look crammed ]
--the background, i give an A for creativity 8D [but you could've made 
the background spread all over, rather than just one side =]   ]
--the hands [i dunno where it leads to..  if it goes into a 
pocket, why is it in the sirt O_o ]
--the scarf looks a bit too solid [ it goes down curved but it looks

well im kinda not in the mood to criticize but practice practice practice!
i kinda have a  fever [a deep one at that]

16 August 2009, 06:06 PM    #3
Joined: 15 Jul 2009
Posts: 39
Erika is going to start it out by the way. xD Oh the hand is supposingly grabbing the scarf. O.o (There's a thumb behind it but I don't blame you if you didn't see it xD) I'll try my best next time!(and keep in mind your critics) D:>

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