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13 August 2009, 03:29 PM   #1
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Last edited by Manderlinaa, 31 August 2009
Okay...I need some help with a title for this one..suggestions???

                   Stop,just listen
              to the beat of the drums
              a frantic rhythm.
            Stop,just watch
               the sparks as they fly
               to be extinguished
                   in the black velvet sky.
           Stop,just feel
              the energy in the air
                 and the throbbing heat 
                  of sweet flame.

14 August 2009, 04:06 PM   #2
Joined: 29 Jun 2009
Posts: 28
idk about a title, but this is really good
I need a hope
I need a light
Something to look to
In the arctic night
Where beauty abounds
In everything
There, my friends, is what I need

20 August 2009, 06:44 AM    #3
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my time has come
 theese days have passed,
 leaves fell down, 
snow covewrd the grass,
butterflys flutterd, 
with the smell of the morning dew, 
and the sun beat down 
upon all of you,
for decades this happend, 
the same ruteen,
but this day of my goodbys has come, 
and i was surley done.

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