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Crits on my new style? :D


12 August 2009, 11:39 AM   #1
Joined: 2 Aug 2009
Posts: 22
Last edited by ‹[.R'.]›, 12 August 2009
I consider this to be one of my best oekakis, lol. :3
But, can I get some crits and then I can work on them?

Please and Ty? :D
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RosehGoesRawr.

12 August 2009, 05:49 PM   #2
Joined: 18 Jul 2009
Posts: 110
I like this. The hiar looks neat and clean. Oh! Those eyes! :D

however, i think you should maybe round out the feet some?
And, I'm not sure it may just be the style, but the shoulders should be... well,
shoulders? Itlooks like they are squished together in the back...

But love all the same!
'a rose by any other name still draws blood'

12 August 2009, 06:07 PM   #3
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The arms a bit short than normal.

Everything else it okay.

Shading needs more work.

13 August 2009, 01:08 PM    #4
Joined: 10 Jul 2009
Posts: 112
Really adorable! But the feet are a bit too pointy. And I think the body is a tad bit too
long. But besides that, it's cute :D
To love and be loved
To the point of going mad
The sweet and burning kiss is
IMITATION
Senses numbing
Consciousness fading away
The overflowing emotions and
Reality
Are painted over in black
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