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WRITING: Poetry: Candles

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11 March 2009, 08:22 PM   #1
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She touched me while she knelt,
Like drops of wax on nipples,
Each breath of hers I felt,
Trembled me in ripples,
And fell upon my fears,
Burning but soon cooling,
Possessing so few years,
Yet knowing what she's doing,
She laid my poor soul bare,
Blowing hot and cold in rushes,
And when she brought me there,
The power pumped in gushes,
The spilling, melting, paraffin,
Milky, heated, flowing,
Night and shadow madly spin,
While she sits flush and glowing,
Until at last it wouldn't burn,
The candle spent by its lover,
I said softly: "Now your turn,"
And knelt to light another.
(1998, revised 2000)

22 March 2009, 06:33 PM   #2
Joined: 21 Mar 2009
Posts: 22
Miauu. Lovely metaphor.
x Each night I wish upon a star I'll run and run , oh so far . To get away from this normal place To hide the pain of your taken face . x </3

2 June 2009, 02:35 AM   #3
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Total Awesomeness
Sexy. ;3

26 June 2009, 02:52 AM    #4
Joined: 24 Jun 2009
Posts: 3
I Love It!
The ending was so adorable.
And just the right amount of kink to set a girl off too ^.~

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